| "When You Cry" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: vampire lips [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 15:45 CST
Comment/Review:
make it tea.
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 01, 2004 04:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaze add another chapter where Ryou comes back. That was great though.
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Title: Wow..
Reviewed By: Kyria the fallen angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 17:30 CST
Comment/Review:
This is really good...mine is short and pathetic,but if you find the time,plz read my fanfictions.They are both one chapter and very short...
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Title: vampirelips
Reviewed By: vampire lips [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 13:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!WAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!I LOVVVE IT!!!!!!! It made me cry sooooo much. Wright more angst. I like it. I couln't figure who wak crying or who was talking at first but it was AWSOME. And don't chang the way you did it I like the mistery.It's good!*^_^*
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