| "Liontaming" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: mtlxiaoangel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 12:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really do like this fic. i usually don't like threesomes but i really like how this worked out. i think it's also incredible that you have kept up so closely with the details of the actual game. it's a VERY interesting plot twist! keep it up! i really would like to see this story continue!!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Alero [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 18:58 CST
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I've really enjoyed reading this story. It's believeable and very entertaining not to mention addicting. I really like where you're going, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: jamabenf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 05:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, I don't normally like slash, but the way you have protrayed Squall, I am actually enjoying this. If the next nine chapters (I'm on six) are half as good, you have a hell of a story. Keep up the good work. Jamabenf
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Reviewed By: jamabenf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2006 05:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, I don't normally like slash, but the way you have protrayed Squall, I am actually enjoying this. If the next nin chapters (I'm on six) are half as good, you have a hell of a story. Keep up the good work. Jamabenf
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Reviewed By: RS On: June 19, 2005 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this fic probably 3 times on your website, and seeing it here I couldn't help but read it again. Selphie and Irvine, and they way they interact, are my favortie part, but you manged to work Squall in wonderfully too. It's just a beautiful fic, and always makes me happy, like (and I know it sounds corny) there is such a thing as true love (okay, I sead it. Go ahead and shoot me). Maybe you hate requests, or something, and I don't want to sound pushy or anything, but I really like to read about Selphie and Irvine's first night. You said "Since Trabia. . ." and I think you could do it beautifully. They are perfect in your story. All your characters are just as they should be. I hope it gets finished, it's simply wonderful. There, enough gushing?
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Title: Wow...another review...I'm getting so talkative...
Reviewed By: Hikaru Maxwell On: April 27, 2005 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I'm normally not a fan of FF het, but this is...amazing. You have to finish it! Please? It's already....2005...and I wanna read the rest! *begs* And yes, you do deserve all the 10's. yes, yes you do. Masterful. And I only caught 2 typos. Through 15 chapters...that's....amazing.
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Reviewed By: Lynette On: November 29, 2004 02:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it seems like a bit of exaggeration that I'm giving you all 10 out of 10s, but I truly enjoy this fic! In fact, I'm so surprised that it hasn't gotten more reviews that I'd give you 820348234 if I could ;). Anyway, I think you're doing a fabulous job developing the characters, especially Squall's insecurities, Selphie's limitless compassion, and just about everything of Irvine. I suppose I should mention Rinoa, too, just because you've mananged to make me really dislike yet sympathize with her at the same time. I think your plot is also quite original and am looking forward to reading past this cliffhanger! :) You've written wondefully so far, especially those side pieces with Raine...I'm an absolute sucker for her!
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Reviewed By: sisd On: November 23, 2004 21:18 CST
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i was surprised to see that you updated after so long...i almost thought that you juss let this fic go. real happy that irvine kinda sorta put rinoa in her place...shes getting on my nerves...but yea, i understand how hard it must be for her and all. hope to see more of squall and his two lovers...thats the sweet part of all this. i love the fact that those two are real patient with him and all...trying to teach and show him love again...real sweet and pretty.
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Title: Jupitor Knight
Reviewed By: Jupitor Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 11:01 CDT
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Wow, that is amazing, oh please you have to email me when you update. I'm just....wow...oh please email me update it finish it. It's awesome.
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Reviewed By: Spawn_of_Hell On: October 18, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cant believe you actually updated!!!!! but im really glad you did. i simply love it. i love the way the characters are... what they feel, how they feel and how you always seem to make the reader feel it too. this fic is awesome so im encouraging you to update once more now!!!!!! ^_^;;;;; good luck!!!!!
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Title: new chap ?
Reviewed By: Spawn of Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah come on !!!! i want a new chapter !!!! youre not that far from the end, ne ? youre killing me here... pretty pretty please ?
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Reviewed By: Spawn of Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 13:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is VERY good ! I wouldve thought that reading the story of ff viii all over again might be boring but to my surprise it was very far from that...and im impress by all the details you remember about the game... the way you were able to put your story while telling the one in the game is awesome... all adds up... and i love what youve done with the characters... your squall is ADORABLE... oh and i dont think there should be a foursome(with quistis...) it would destroy the credibility of the whole story. squall loving people ok, but three ? and if he doesnt love her i dont think hed be that ready to fuck her... at that point why not make that an orgy and add Zell to the mix ?(it would be silly)... anyways youre story is so good so far i dont think you need my input...anyways, thank you for that wonderful story and keep up the good work... i cant wait to read whats gonna happen next !!!! argghh! such mystery !(see thats incredible, you respect the real story and make it so i have no idea whats really gonna happen next)... good luck !
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Reviewed By: Yue Kisaragi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 22:28 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow!!!! This fic is good... really good. I love it!! Keep up the good writing!! I'm waiting for more^^
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Reviewed By: froop [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs some Quistis in a foursome so she can 'unwind' aswell >:D
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Reviewed By: froop [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 10:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Needs some Quistis in a foursome so she can 'unwind' aswell >:D
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