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Reviewed By: silverdemon87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2004 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whistles* That was definitely something different... lol it's kinda sad but I didn't know it was a Hentai fic until...well...I came to the last two chapters... Okay...get ready cuz it's gonna be one pretty long review. Alrighty, on the positive side, very cool! Loved the way you used Battousai as a leading role and how the characters weren't OOC. Well done! Okay...time for critique. Okay, the beginning was a good start. I expected more of a climactic and sort of contridictory feeling in Kenshin because of...ya know, he and his former self. I believe that Kenshin definitely has some strong feelings for Kaoru but not so much as to turn into Battousai in two minutes. Also, the dailogue. You were on the edge of making it too descriptive so it sounded as if the characters were describing the story and not living it. Lastly, (I think) you've focused a lot on Kenshin and that's okay because hey... I do that too but don't make it so much as Kenshin is the "ABSOLUTE BEST AND NO ONE CAN BEAT HIM AND HE CAN PREDICT HIS OPPONENTS' MOVES" and all that. We want him to be cool but don't stress it so much, like when the gangsters that tried to challenge Kenshin when they went into town. You probably already have deleted this review because of the following reasons: 1) It's too long 2) WHO DOES THIS GIRL THINK SHE IS?! SAYING THAT STUFF ABOUT MY FIC?!! 3) STUPID FLAMER!!Yeah...I get that a lot... ;; well, delete this review if you want...but that's a review for ya... Well done overall |
Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 18:47 CDT
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AWWW, C'MON! UPDATE PWEASE?????
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Reviewed By: Lady Hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 21:08 CDT
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so you know french? thats hot. ton story est tres magnifique!!!
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Reviewed By: khrisofer_kolumbus [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2004 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Ahhhhh
Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE TON UPDATE! What's gonna happen next? Is that Katana dude or whatever gonna kidnap Kaoru? Oh, well, please please, please, please, please, please, update! Bold Italics Underline Font Size Font Color
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Reviewed By: KuramasBlueGirl On: May 07, 2004 19:12 CDT
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woooooooooooot you updated im so glad ive been waiting for a long ass time too but hell it was well worth it thanks for the GREAT read
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Title: Tsuyoku
Reviewed By: Tsuyoku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 11:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kami, update again! I love this story! It is a great fic, espesically for Rurouni Kenshin. Nice POV's and writing styles as well. So, onegai, update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tee Hee
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Reviewed By: SesshoumaruStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!!Puuhhllleeeeesssseee UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: kuroi kaze On: April 17, 2004 03:26 CDT
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I love it please write more! you left me at a cliff hanger I hate it when people do that. If you do not write more you will anger the BLACK WIND.
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Reviewed By: fhtreshgfd On: April 08, 2004 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooooohhh! What's gonna happen next? You left us hanging!T_T pls update soon!!!!!! Bold Italics Underline Font Size Font Color
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Reviewed By: rthtrb On: April 01, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, thats so sweet! Er- is what Kaoru doing to him considered a ...well..rape? Probably not, seeing as how he is enjoying it..but still...oh well, pls update soon!
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Reviewed By: Battosai's Devil On: March 28, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic. How I wish I was Karou when Battosai took her inocence. You a Good writter!
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Reviewed By: midnightbabiepat On: March 25, 2004 06:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job, bring on the good stuff. let kaoru dominate kenshin. glad to see that the story is back. look forward to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: ewunia On: March 22, 2004 21:17 CST
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And this chapter should have a lemon in the end. Or you are going to write it in another chapter. Great story by the way.
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Reviewed By: KuramasBlueGirl On: March 22, 2004 20:15 CST
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Wooooot you updated i really like this story this was a good chapter. thanks for the great read. im a reader from ff.net i like this place alot better. ;)
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