"The one I wanted" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Spawn of Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 15:53 CDT Comment/Review: hum. i like it. its nice to read something thats not squallxseifer... and i absolutely love how you describe the kissing scenes... yummy ! ah cool fic... :)
| Reviewed By: hezaBUT On: December 23, 2003 02:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm not for this coupling, but that's beside the point. Anyway, your fiction is good because it doesn't seem to want to rush the scenes anyway and the characters' dialogues to their actions is very believable and quite in character. Nice job.
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