| "Smoke and Mirrors" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Various the Squirrel Deamon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT THERE!!! THATS CREUL!!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! *Puppy dog eyes* Pleaseeeeeeeee? Do it for the squirrel deamon!
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEP! That is so funny. Sure the 'making someone fall in love with you' is very well-used, the world could use a few more. ^-^ Jou/Kaiba makes it so very interesting. I like the way you characterized everyone, too. You stuck to cannon with their personalities, but still made it hilarious. I can't wait to see the next part. ^^
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Reviewed By: . On: February 29, 2004 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool Story, write more!
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Reviewed By: . On: February 29, 2004 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool Story, write more!
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Reviewed By: sayu On: January 17, 2004 14:47 CST
Comment/Review:
update please! itz a great start! cant wait 4 the rest!
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Reviewed By: Sarasusa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cruel of you not to have continued this lovely fic! I greatly enjoyed the crumpled-paper-ball conversation between J and K. (As an Otogi fan, I also applaud his characterization here.) I really want to see where it goes from here. So please, please continue!
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 05, 2004 23:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaze update!!!
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Reviewed By: dark selene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont thik its cheap it's quite good and it has a lot of potential . so keep goin and update soon
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