| "Bachelorette SAJ" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS (not logged in... again...) On: July 17, 2004 18:25 CDT
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Very funny dates! Poor poor Hiei and the cars and i dont want talk about Bakura's poor head! Oh yea the 'slurp' sounds were funny! Oh yea about me ol' Yami... heh heh shes not gonna be here for a while *winks* *coughs* anyways... Well i think SAJ should pick Bakura cuz hes so sweeet! Hieis cool but i don't think hes as much boy material... AHHH *runs away as Hiei chases her*
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Reviewed By: Yay, it's Sajy! On: July 17, 2004 15:16 CDT
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Wow, what a sizzlin' date with Hiei! I just wish those "slurpy" noises could have been something else besides popsicles....*sighs* Next chapter is going to be the last right? So I'll finally get to find out who my boyfriend is! Yay! Bakura or Hiei? Hmm.... I know, the Freaki Tiki dude!!!!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 16:40 CDT
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Hiei or Bakura...... Hiei or Bakura...... hmmm... well, if it was me, I'd pick Hiei! ^^ Blood. Heh heh. Is he turning into a stalker or sumthing though? The whole tree thing, ya know..... *shrug* I will relay ideas as soon as I come up with something... promise!
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS (not logged in) On: June 25, 2004 23:04 CDT
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*Virtually slaps you* sorry ^_^ had to do it! What song was it? See we all get distracted like now i have to remember what i was going to say... Oh there it is ^_^ I like what Animegirl22 said about how you may need a break. Im lazy and am always on a break. Like after i write a chapter i go into a no writing stage for a week or something, then i try to write and i get out a chapter in about a month or two ^_^ Yea i no im lazy but after all that i get into another stage where i NEED to write or else well i dunno... Oh read a really well written book that helps!
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Reviewed By: Animegirl22 On: June 21, 2004 09:18 CDT
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Hmmmmmmmmmmm...... I always get distracted...like once I was trying to type a chapter and I decided to watch my fave movie! (Monty Python And The Holy Grail) And then it took me about a month or two to actually post the chapter. maybe you should give yourself a break from fanfics. I always do that with video games when i'm stuck, then in about a week or month later, when i play it again, I ease past that part! I also alwayssssss do it with my fanfics. Trust me, this should work better than having writers block for ALL of your fics! ^__________^
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Reviewed By: litlleniegenie On: May 24, 2004 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good....and can you update it more pleaze????domo arigato!!^_^
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Reviewed By: Drof Tceferp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 15:09 CDT
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Um, just so you know...It's Styx...Oh, and thankies so much for reviewing!!! YOu should see my best fic, Nagging DOubt...It's forty-odd chappies long...People say it's good...THEY LIE!!! SOryr. But, it's down for maintanence...*twitch shiver cringe shudder.* I haev to rewrite chappies one through thirty-eight, repost them all, and now get them back from my dad....UPDATE SOON DUDE!!
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Title: DUKE IS HOT
Reviewed By: Duke's Kitty On: May 11, 2004 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey can I go on a date with Duke*Glomps duke* Duke:*Glomps back* Me:Others refere to hima as dicy boy but I prefere cutey boy! Duke:I like her alot! Me:PLeaes?
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Reviewed By: Animegirl22 On: May 10, 2004 19:37 CDT
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^_^0 lol, sorry, can't help it. I get hyper over lotsa things...TY for using the name I gave ya! It's gonna end soon? 8_8 it can't end! the fic is too good! i'm so happy Touya ain't a bachlor thingy, i wanna take him! update!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: May 10, 2004 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yuki my love... *drool* Random Person: Uh She's not going to know who he is if you keep using different names... Momma Cat: Mrs.Diana Uesugi, that has pleasent ring to it, don't it? Random Person:...no. Momma Cat: Eiri, Eiri, Eiri, just rolls off your tongue... Air-ri, Eiri! Random Person: >_< Stop it! Momma Cat: Eiri "Yuki" Uesugi... *drools more* Random Person: You know this is a review and all you've done is obesessed about a unobtainable gay guy... Momma Cat: He is not gay! Random Person: Then what do you call Shuichi? That pink haired fairy ain't a pixie you know... Momma Cat: Maybe I should stop this conversation I'm having with mys- uh Random Person and actually review eh? I liked Kurama's date but you seemed to have rushed a little on Bakura's. Hey! Since Bakura's Yami is free can I have him? Maybe in loincloth... *wink wink* Random Person:(To Tab) And you missed this girl? Momma Cat: My bishie harem! One day my dream WILL be realized! Before that time, write, write, write! Perhaps tonight I'll write IoYFG, with you as the star! Well... not the star, maybe a stage prop or something... Hey what guy would you like? So far only five or so girls have come back, you could have Yugi if you like. ^_^ Maybe Duke? I don't think you'd want Yami Bakura, he is preverted. But Malik is good. ^_^
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Reviewed By: insaneAUTHORESS [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 17:17 CDT
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Mwhaha my Yami isn't here because i shipped her off to Austraila ^_^ oh that was funny with the 'blood'!Awww poor Kurama! But hey looks like Hieis getting a bit possesive! Keep it up this is great!
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Reviewed By: Sajy-poo!!! On: May 10, 2004 16:52 CDT
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Yay! Two kisses in one chapter! Man, I rock when it comes to dating!!!!! Nah, just kidding.....^^; I am kinda disturbed about the whole Hiei-stalking-me-thing and his willingness to drink blood (scary!!!) but hey, I still luv him and wanna end up with him! But great chapter! Super funny! But tons of spelling mistakes!!! Don't worry though *winks* they didn't take anything away from the story except quite a few letters that should have been there....*sighs* But please update soon! P.S. You finally gave that poor woman a name!!! P.S.S. Are you allowed to have a "P.S." in a review?? P.S.S.S. Guess I'll find out!!
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Title: >>...
Reviewed By: Kuroi Ryu On: April 05, 2004 10:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OKAY Ten.....Yugi is upset with heights (TRee HUGEr),HIEI IS SO DISTURbed BY you.ALrighty then.
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Title: Ug, you're evil!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Sajy-chan On: March 06, 2004 15:30 CST
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I can't believe you interrupted the kiss!!!! And before it even happened!!! You are SO evil!!! He tries to kiss me and you stop him?! YOU WON'T BE FORGIVEN!!!!!!! Well, unless you make pudding! That was super yummy! ^^ Funny chapter tho, and the date went really well. I forgot, did I date anybody else in this chapter? (My mind is focussed only on my one true love: Hiei). Ah, well, it doesn't matter if I did or not. I wanna end up with Hiei! Awesome writting sis, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kirei On: February 26, 2004 20:15 CST
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I thought it was hilarious. thank you for writing something that actually keeps me awake and intersted at the same time. you should continue to write i would definitely read ur fics. bye bye for now
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