| "Hurt" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: wolfensoul9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! Some of the reviewers here are a bunch of horndogs. Jeez people, there's more to sex than just the sex. Anyway. That was the best. I never seen anyone make those two so in character. I can find absolutely no faults. I would KILL to see this happen in the anime. Damn... you're freakin' good! Never before have I seen such a pure story of love. Every single sentence was perfect. There is simply no exaggeration in that sentence. Truly, I am in awe. Hell, I couldn't even concentrate on the sex portion of the story because the love between the two was so strong. And you got them so IN CHARACTER. Every other lemon (and most of the non-lemons) don't even come close to describing the couple's feelings for each other. Hibiki's concern for Dita was so sweet. And when Dita was describing how she "hurt"... aww... that's so sweet! I have read a grand total of 294 fanfics on Vandread. This one is ranked at number two. Truly, I am in awe. Methinks you have done what humanity has been trying to do for thousands of years. You've described pure love. I would love to see this story from Dita's perspective.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this a while ago, and when was looking for any new Vandread fics, I saw and re-read it. I liked it before, and still so now. Ahhh, the lemony goodness, lol. But you really did the characters so well. Keep it up, this was good.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I loved this! It's too cute!!!! I think you captured their naivete (sp?) very well. And even if they didn't know much about sex, who cares? Who better to figure it out on their own than a couple of horny teenagers? Kudos! ^_^
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession On: August 20, 2005 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww... That was just what I was looking for. Thanks and good job.
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Title: Hurt
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 18:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Hentai_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2005 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I haven't reviewed >.< This was great.
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: Lily Tsukino (not logged in) On: July 09, 2005 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cute....
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Reviewed By: JWMA On: May 03, 2005 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fic, I don't see Hibiki being so forward though. Also, two individuals who know nothing of the others physiology probably wouldn't do so well. Still it was enjoyable.
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Reviewed By: J.R.Karsten [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great work. I like how the two are perfictly IC also, consitering they don't always get together in that setting. Taking away the lemon parts, you nailed what they would have done right on the head. A little boring, but over all I enjoyed it. Good work.
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Reviewed By: Elf From Space On: March 05, 2004 03:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh. Nice, I was definitely entertained. The series just BEGS for this to happen sometime, doesn't it! Fun job of having them figure out what they're supposed to do.
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: Zauriel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is erotically delicious. You've mad an animal out of Hibiki. God, Dita sounds so hot.
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