| "Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 05:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic was cool, i enjoyed readin' this... there's just one thing that is bothering me -_- ~ you said in the last chapter about if they will stay together or not... is there another chapter to this?? ~ i'm basically saying the same thing as shivalatina so... if you do have another chapter, plzzzzzz update, cause i wanna read more ^-^
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 12:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very interesting. the last chapter talks about it they\\\'ll stay together. Did you write a sequel or is this story unfinished? Either way, it was a good place to stop. ^_^
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 13, 2004 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. Please write more soon.
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Reviewed By: saiyainprincess88 On: December 26, 2003 15:04 CST
Comment/Review:
im blocked from reading this chapter and it reeally pissed me off (like royally pissed) i want to read your fiction badly.......so if u have any power over how it is blocked please undo it and i'll review it after being read. MUCH LOVIN' saiyainprincess88 A.K.A CAT
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Reviewed By: Janet On: December 15, 2003 18:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love it write more
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Reviewed By: wawashkesh On: November 29, 2003 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
in the one chapter, gohan was just leaving his house to check on goku? did they just make him go blind? please continue soon.
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