| "Sleeping Mistake" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh(not SIed On: February 29, 2004 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
gah!!!!!!!!!! you gotta update this fic!!! you left another cliffy!!! >_< damn you! update soonies! pleeeeeeeeease! lolz
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Title: Daaaaaaaaamn.....
Reviewed By: GeminiElf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2004 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy...freakin....shit....THIS STORY FREAKIN ROCKS DUDE!!!!!! Please! Keep writing! Kill off Kouga! Or Koga(how ever the hell you spell it)! I'm serious, this story is at that level that it seems like I'm reeading a Linkin Park song and I cry because the words describe me perfectly. I literally cried when I read the part where it seemed Inuyasha was dead. I mean, were exactly alike! If he were in my body and I were in his, besides the sexual interest, no one would notice the difference. Anyway, this story is really good if it made me cry. I normally can hold my emotions, but this story is the shit man! It's da shiznizz!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 22:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon please i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LadyNight [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 20:55 CST
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Awsome fic! i hope that was Inuyasha at the opening of the cave! I don't want Koga to force his mark on Kagome. Please update sooner!
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Reviewed By: Chokoreeto Ame (not logged in) On: February 27, 2004 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I already gave you a review saying it was good but you really have to watch your spelling sweetie. It's Kouga, well write another chapter soon! Oh and delve deeper into the Inu/Kag thing, it just seems all of a sudden from when he carried her back to Kaede's earlier.
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Title: Cute, funny, sad, sexy, and twisty!!!
Reviewed By: Vellakitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute, funny, sad, sexy, and down right twisted....I love it!!!!! Please up date ASAP!!! Man this is one hell of a fic!!! I love the way you make all the stuff I wrote at the top mix in together!! Its so cool!!! You got to love this fic!!! That is, if you like fics that have Inu&Kag couples and twists in it!!! I can't, but will, wait for your next up date!!! Well bye for now!!! ^-__-^
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Reviewed By: Chokoreeto Ame [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2004 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the idea but to be honest the shifting povs gets a bit confusing at times. try to specify who's talking, other than that keep it up. and go write another chapter! oh and incase ur still not sure her name is kaede, thanks!
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glade inu and kag are ok! Update soon!!! I really like your story!!! Keep it up! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Mirokuslover On: January 19, 2004 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!
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Reviewed By: Inu Girl On: January 11, 2004 14:32 CST
Comment/Review:
you suck you could have writen more and made the chapter longer
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Title: asa
Reviewed By: Nne On: January 06, 2004 17:05 CST
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MORELEMONEYGOODNESS,MY,SPACE,BAR,IS,BROKEN!
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Reviewed By: Kashino-sama On: January 06, 2004 16:44 CST
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What the hell do you mean by Did she just do what i think she did??!?!?! you wrote the damn story!!!!
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Title: bad japanese, good fic
Reviewed By: Hino Mitsukiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, here are all the names that you might spell wrong b/c of the anime: Kouga-Koga Kikyou-Kikyo Myouga-Myoga Shippou-Shippo Sesshoumaru-Sesshomaru Houjou-Hojo Souta-Sota Kirara-Kilala Saimyoushou-Saimyosho Toutousai-Totosai Kaede-Kaeda
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Reviewed By: The Fallen Angel of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 08:28 CST
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No lemon, lime. lemon and lime totally different. its kAedE not kieda. and myoga. any ways, i want you to continue this story soon please? pretty please? pretty please with sugar and cherries on top? and a side plate of ramen, that stuff is the best. ja ne.
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Reviewed By: synthetichopes On: December 29, 2003 20:56 CST
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its actually kaede. i don't know where you got the a at the end. other than that, kinky.
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