Title: MR.Waff
Reviewed By: Creeper666 On: February 23, 2004 14:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its not long'nuf. This story has allot more potential, also the idea with mistao beging motherly and telling auska to take the chance now with shinji is awsome, with the lose of kaji. Mostly its a really good fic. I give it a 6 cuz its not ling nuf'. lol
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