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Reviewed By: The Fluffanator. On: December 25, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ducati. In the Manga it is 'Kirara'. In the Anime It is 'Kilala'. Kagome Kicks ass. Don't listen to 'RabidFan'. Evil kagome is retarded, but I agree. Kagome is not obnoxious. I must ask that you be more discriptive.
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sango's kitty's name is Kirara... erm... not Kialala. Anyway. I suggest getting a beta reader and making longer chapters. But the plot and idea it good. Oh, and be more descriptive too. Thanks. Merry Christmas. Ciaoness...
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Title: hahahaha
Reviewed By: evil kagome On: December 11, 2003 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahaha i love this fic. man am i bad!! im so glad u mad me like that i hate it whe they make me all sad and boy crazy sometimes. well i love ur fic and dont forget to update or i might have to hurt u. so update SOON!!!! well thanks!
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Reviewed By: anime fanitc On: December 08, 2003 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for chapter 3! i loved it it has all the things you siad it was going to have!
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Reviewed By: anime fanitc On: December 05, 2003 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story! i wish i you could have written it where i could see it ps:AS,you rock i can't wait to talk about this at school!!
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Title: Hey AJ
Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 05:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey AJ I finally read it, tho you could have Kagome a little less mean, I mean isn't that Kikyous job *snort* (Danm that bitch...ehem anyways)Byebye.bwahahahahahahhahah
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Title: Cool story
Reviewed By: RS On: November 30, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I don't want to sign in but this is RekkaShinen. I really like your story and except for a few spelling mistakes, it's going really great! And can you make the chapters longer? Like adding in a bit more detail? If you did that your story would be awesome! ^.~ v
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Reviewed By: Jaenelle Angeline [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 17:15 CST
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awsome fic i cant wait for the next chap
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh On: November 30, 2003 10:47 CST
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lol iight that one was much better. ur gettin good!! ^_^ update again soon. and im kinda weirded out about tha fact that kagome is so...obnoxious...lmao! but i suppose theres a point to it...maybe we'll see y she's got that badass attitude in lata chapters =]. Ja ne!!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Bunny21 On: November 29, 2003 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more dont stop ^.~
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 19:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update really soon!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh On: November 29, 2003 17:47 CST
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ok umm first u dont even actually have tha fic and now u only put up one paragraph?? is this ur first time ever posting a fanfic? o.0 it seems like it could b really good but...one paragraph at a time?? c'mon now...
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Reviewed By: B.W. authoress On: November 29, 2003 12:53 CST
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I know that you can't see it i tried to get it on but it won't work i sent the webmaster a e-mail and he/she hasn't answered. If you know please help. I am cluless at the moment.@_@ GOT IT?
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh On: November 29, 2003 00:34 CST
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r u aware that ur story is invisible?? we canot see it O.O
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Title: erm..where's the story????
Reviewed By: LottaLuvGurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 14:44 CST
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??????????where's the story?????????
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