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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2004 15:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
s'okay
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Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 16:42 CDT
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Hi AJ! Sorry I havnt' reviewed in a while. Please update...OR ELSE. Oh yeah and if 'The Fluffanator' is lisrtening, I would like to tell you that I never ever get angry at some random persons review unless it is nasty and discriminating. You on the other hand seem to not no what constructive critiscism is or know how to stay out of others buisness. I hope you didn't get the wrong impression of me. Oh Yeah I'll see yah later AJ see Ya!!!
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 19:04 CDT
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your to lazy but you have a good idea i advise you to rewrite the story with longer chapters and more description. i bet you'll be amazed at how good it will turn out
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: March 24, 2004 08:20 CST
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I don't know how you can expect 4 reviews per chapter when the chapters are barely a page long. I mean you could put a little more effort into your work. Try explaining everything in elaborate detail or something along those lines. I'm not dissing your work. I'm printing it I like it when Kagome fights back and this better be a kagome and InuYasha fic. If not I expect a flame for every new chapter. I haven't read it yet I just like the summary. If this is a InuYasha and that Bitch I will rip your icy black heart out and feed it to a rabid dog, who I will then kill and feed it sell to a chinese restuarant who will then problaly feed it to an unsuspecting customer who will then get deadly ill and puke it up in a toliet which will then be flushed and sent to some ocean where the fish will eat it and then in turn they will be caught and eaten which will start the whole process over again. Well anyway update soon and make sure this is an enjoyable story for me and your other readers who I'm sure will agree with me. Love Miss Nikki
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Title: tooo short
Reviewed By: kitty kistune On: March 16, 2004 21:15 CST
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damn are your chapters small but atleast they are good.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: shadow_hearth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 18:43 CST
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I think that this is a great story! True it is 'Kirara', but don't worry about it! ^.^ It's only because the anime says Kilala, but that's because the r is prounounced as l. Other than that I think it's a great story! I hope that you update soon! Looking forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: Inu Girl On: January 04, 2004 07:39 CST
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aww longer chps plese and up date soon
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Reviewed By: K005 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 05:43 CST
Comment/Review:
loved it pls update
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Reviewed By: The Fluffanator. On: December 25, 2003 22:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ducati. In the Manga it is 'Kirara'. In the Anime It is 'Kilala'. Kagome Kicks ass. Don't listen to 'RabidFan'. Evil kagome is retarded, but I agree. Kagome is not obnoxious. I must ask that you be more discriptive.
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2003 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sango's kitty's name is Kirara... erm... not Kialala. Anyway. I suggest getting a beta reader and making longer chapters. But the plot and idea it good. Oh, and be more descriptive too. Thanks. Merry Christmas. Ciaoness...
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Title: hahahaha
Reviewed By: evil kagome On: December 11, 2003 18:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahaha i love this fic. man am i bad!! im so glad u mad me like that i hate it whe they make me all sad and boy crazy sometimes. well i love ur fic and dont forget to update or i might have to hurt u. so update SOON!!!! well thanks!
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Reviewed By: anime fanitc On: December 08, 2003 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for chapter 3! i loved it it has all the things you siad it was going to have!
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Reviewed By: anime fanitc On: December 05, 2003 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story! i wish i you could have written it where i could see it ps:AS,you rock i can't wait to talk about this at school!!
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Title: Hey AJ
Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 05:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey AJ I finally read it, tho you could have Kagome a little less mean, I mean isn't that Kikyous job *snort* (Danm that bitch...ehem anyways)Byebye.bwahahahahahahhahah
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Title: Cool story
Reviewed By: RS On: November 30, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I don't want to sign in but this is RekkaShinen. I really like your story and except for a few spelling mistakes, it's going really great! And can you make the chapters longer? Like adding in a bit more detail? If you did that your story would be awesome! ^.~ v
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