| "The Criminal" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blonde_Chick2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 21:10 CST
Comment/Review:
woa...this story's awsome!!!!!! omg please update asap!
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 21:03 CST
Comment/Review:
yay! you updated! keep updating! i like your story. just try to keep the inserted author's notes to a minimum. but great job!
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2004 12:29 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great. It has become one of my favorites!! Please continue. I want to know if anything is going to happen between Kag/Inu. Also what is going to happen to Kagome when (and if ever) Inu gets caught. So many possibilities.
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Title: Love your story
Reviewed By: inulover^-^ On: November 27, 2004 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I love your story and I dunno why other stupid ppl won't freaking leave a doggone review!!! But, anyways you have to update...I know that you probably are pretty dang buzy with school and you do have a life but practically your story is my life and I need to read your story dang it! Update plz.
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Reviewed By: caxXxEllExXxny On: October 23, 2004 16:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pls. don't stop writing this fanfic... Continue it's starting to get good!
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan (offline) On: September 25, 2004 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far. Its so awsome. I hope you update it soon. ^_^
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: Midnight1212 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story so ppplleeaasse update as soon as u possibly can before the suspence gets to me and i become a physco mainiac...Sry i suck at spelling ... its a thing
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was super short please update
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Title: Loving It!
Reviewed By: genocide_bloodshed [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2004 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I would love to see how Kagome's and Inuyasha's relationship turns out. Your story has kept me well entertained and interested. You are a good writer. I will keep on reading as long as you keep posting the story. I just wanted to tell you that.
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 07:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok u can just kill me now....that took so long i allmost forgot the story allmost... your lucky i like this story so much...please this time dont wait so long please Bethie
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Reviewed By: Tetsumi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good^^hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 ( not logged in ) On: August 11, 2004 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo soo good
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 23:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
please don't be selfish and update you said that you would finish this fanfic so god damn it finsih it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: inu_obsessed_chic27 (nsi) On: June 10, 2004 17:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I very much enjoyed the beginning of your fic but as it progressed I found myself becoming more and more bored. the summary was good, but I found it odd when she didn't mind the fact that she was kidnapped and her captor took her out for a movie.... that strikes me as odd and although I do enjoy most fics this one is just to way off for it to seem believable in my eyes. I'm not trying to insult you, just giving you a truthful opinion so plz don't mind me.
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing suffers a bit, but your plot is what keeps me reading. =)
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