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Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 16:38 CST
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GAH! *cant spell* put up**** yupp ok.. last post had typo and... yeah...
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Title: Again...
Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 16:34 CST
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And again I must post my own review to see them all... This is agrivating... I'll try to up date soon. I'm getting ready to pu a new chapter up... or 2. :)
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 21:09 CST
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AIEEEE!!!! MORE PLEEEEZE!!!! wat will inuyasha do??? can there be some lemon, pleeeze???? *blush* ya ya im a hentia LIVE WITH IT! i dont really like lemon but i LOVE lime so can we have some inu/kag lime pleze? *blush*
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Title: wowies!
Reviewed By: rosie13 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Zis iz good! I wanna see what happens! Inuyasha? romantic? MUSHY ROMANTIC???? AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! noooooooooo!!! (actually, thats good.he is so emotionally constipated sometimes...) newayz, i like this story, its one a my favs. Update soon! :)
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Reviewed By: AngelOfBlades [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 09:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this story rocks! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TwiztidJuggalette [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i always knew inuyasha thought of kagome that way! ^_~
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 23:36 CST
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YAY! I can read all my reviews now! And yes, Kanna is soo cute! I like Kanna, she is just really cool and I wanted her inthis fic, but children should act like children ya know. And later on Shippo comes into the story too. Oh, and Rin of course! As for Sessh... you'll see, he comes in more later on too. And no Inu/Kikyo lemons. Kikyo's a slut and I decided that making an evil lemon with them two TOGETHER... I would have to pluck my eyes out! I hate that bitch! And yes, I do update almost everyday. I have nothing better to do. Unless I'm buisy with school work or something. Well, ok... now I REALLY have to go. And sorry if I miss spelled anything in the fics or something. I did spell check but sometimes that doesn't always work the way ya want it ya know? Yeah well, I'll update soon! c ya!
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Title: Damnit!
Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 23:28 CST
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I'm thinking that maybe if I put up a review it will show me the rest of the reviews... Damn thing aint working! It won't show me all the reviews! Well, anyways, I think that my fic is pretty good for a begginer. Sorry, I'm into a lot of detail but I want to give you all a good idea of what things look like and all. Kagome and Inuyasha are my fav. characters so of course they are going to have the best parts, best cloths, and best everything else in my fics! Well, maybe... maybe not. Well, they'll both have a happy ending in all or most of my fics anyways! I'm already thinking about what kinda fic I'm going to make after I finish this one... well, c ya.
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 16:14 CST
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No, not an evil lemon of Inu/Kik! Bad!! It's so good and Kanna is so cute. Well alright you can write the lemon, but I won't read it. *huffs* I don't see why it needs the lemon between them when you said yourself you can barely think of it. Good she told him a plausible reason to turn down his offer. Keep it up!
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Title: yay!!
Reviewed By: filialunae618 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 11:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay updates!!!!!! i love updates!! im so glad and surprised that u updated so soon and soo much! usually i have 2 wait like weeks!!! but great job again... dont worry, i like how much detail u put into the story. it makes it fun 2 read! and i REALLY like kanna being a normal little kid it makes her sound soooo kawai!!!! u should get sesshou more into this 2 ^_^ bc i love him lol maybe he could come 2 try 2 break kagome out like once she gets caught... just a suggestion!! keep up the great updates!!!! ~aya
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 01:32 CST
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This is good so far. I can not wait to see how Kagome and InuYasha will get together. I hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 01:32 CST
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This is good so far. I can not wait to see how Kagome and InuYasha will get together. I hope you can update soon.
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Reviewed By: TwiztidJuggalette [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here i thought miroku was the only pervert! Update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg this is great!!! You must continue, it's so good. I can't wait to see how this turns out, hehe! Well as you can tell I'm enjoying this very much and Inuyasha's "woman" is Kikyo right? Really good! Continue soon!
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Title: great job ,,,,, again?
Reviewed By: filialunae618 (even tho it wont let me sign into mm!!!! >_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 09:18 CST
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i was wonderin y u deleted it! i read the story at sum odd hour or the night then went 2 put it in my fav and it was gone! well mystery solved lol! so as u can tell i loved this story!! it's awesome 2 come across sum REALLY original fic ideas now and then. and i also like how uve changed it since last nite ^_^ i was g2 say the aim scene wasnt that great lol but i love it plz keep goin!!! ^_^ !~aya
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