| "Let The World Slip" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 18:23 CDT
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I love it. Fun with an actual story line not just hhmmm. Great way to end it too. *lol* Stroke of genuis, you leave it open for more.
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Reviewed By: Jellybob On: June 18, 2004 01:40 CDT
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This was great! You made everyone in chracter and Sagara was amusing as usual. The ending was great too. ^_______^ Awesome job! I really liked it!
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Reviewed By: wired syirm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Everyone seems to have covered the ground I was going to comment on, but really, this is great. I'm so happy to see such well written fics! I'm walking away filled with warm and fuzzy feelings.
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Reviewed By: dj_hellfire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 08:05 CDT
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Wow, i am speechless!! i thought it was awesome!! i loved the way the characters seemed just like they are in the anime, it was so easy to picture. plz write another FMP fic, because it seems that you have a lot of fans!!! Peace!
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: March 15, 2004 18:04 CST
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You should write a chapter for that. It would be interesting to see what you'd have Kaname choose.
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Reviewed By: gUls On: March 10, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10+++ it's so sweet! i was blushing right along with kaname!!! much love!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"We are sufficiently prepared." I thought it was great the way you Sousuke in character. "It was odd that the only other person he trusted so completely was Tessa, but perhaps the unique bonds that linked the minds of the Whispered also linked their hearts." In this sentence I couldn't really understand why Sousuke wouldn't trust Tessa, his commanding officer. "he" seemed like a typo. Sorry for the nitpicking. I really enjoyed the fic.
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Reviewed By: papertiger On: January 27, 2004 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my favorite fic on this site! if you write anymore for FMP, I'd love to read!
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Yes! Yes! Finally stories about FMP!! I loved the story and thought you were right on with the characters. Hope to read more from you soon!
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Reviewed By: marnika On: January 23, 2004 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoyed your story ,they were kept in character and instilled with the humor from the show.Good job.
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Title: Found something fun to read
Reviewed By: Elf From Space On: January 19, 2004 03:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heeee!!! Was kind of surprised to find an interesting looking FMP fic and then see who the author was! I adore Sosuke and this was excellent. Very sweet lemon. Also very cerative details in the room, which I won't ask how you thought of all of that ^^
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Reviewed By: Sailor Centauri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is really sweet! Kaname and Sagara all the way!!
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Reviewed By: Darkened Curiousity On: December 27, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am absolutely in love with this fanfic! I see that you have only written this one fic for Full Metal Panic.. Would you please write another one? Please Please Please!
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Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I'm so happy that someone is starting to write FMP fics. I simply love the anime. And you did a great chartacter job on both of them. If you write anymore about this anime, I would definitely read it. And the ending was so cute with the note. jschu25
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 22:26 CST
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i liked that! it was cute!!
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