| "Let The World Slip" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuyasha128b [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 20:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would think that another chapter mysteriously appearing in the next week would be a very good thing, however, that is unlikely. overall I'd say that the way it was phrased was the only reason I gave it 9's instead of 10's... kinda like how you might like a manga but don't read it because the drawing style doesn't agree with you? anyways, I hope you continue, although I'll be backing up this one on my hard drive if you do or not.
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Reviewed By: AngelicChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I thank you may have to just right, anther one to it, just so I can see what fantisy she choses. I hope you will. Again, love the story.
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Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! that was the cutest full metal panic story i have ever read! please make another chapter about kaname's fantasy!! you are very talented please continue writing!!
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Reviewed By: lldoogll [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved how u kept the characters in their original context. keep writing more yo.
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Title: AWWE
Reviewed By: darkwolvesoverlord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats sooooooooo cuh-ute!!!! its soo adorable!!!!!!!! i love this fanfic!!! its going under my favs!
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Reviewed By: lildaemon On: August 03, 2005 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG... HAHAHA... amazing fic!! ^_^ ~ it was absolutely AMAZING... and the characters were perfect!! i love how you kept both characters true to their original selves... yet added in the hidden aspect that we don't really see in the series!! great job!! keep writing!!
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Title: good
Reviewed By: yugiohchick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time I ever read a FMP fic, and i loved it. I liked how you kept them in character, and the lemon was not to over the top, which is a good thing, cause people just go straight to the lemon, and I'm like, okay? You should definately write more K&S stories. You have a lot of potential in writing, and I am looking foward to reading more of your work. And If you have read Harry Potter ant the half Blood Prince-- Fuck Snape!!!! ~yugiohchick~
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Reviewed By: hauduck [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 06:25 CDT
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i could actually see this situation happening between these two and you kept them in character so well too! the ending was awesome! good job!
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Title: so cute
Reviewed By: reene On: May 12, 2005 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good. The lemon wasn't over the top and was very romantic. Sousuke and Kaname were in character. You should write more SXK fics.
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Title: i liked it
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad i liked it a lot. your talented. hope you write another story with this couple.
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Title: VioletGerald
Reviewed By: VioletGerald [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the first FMP fanfics I read, although I am reviewing this months after the fact. Very creative and in character, I had no trouble seeing Sousuke or Kaname in this particular predicament. Very well written, and definately enjoyable. I would recommend this story to any FMP fan over the age of 18 - no need to let the younguns' be educated early as well as this story could 'educate' them ^_-.
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Reviewed By: mrsw [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2004 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww i like it. it was cute. . . .and sexy. he he h eupdate soon
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Reviewed By: black-shadowpup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i absolutely love this fanfic! i've never read one that has them in a love hotel under those conditions. its was hilariouse and sexual and i loved it!
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD HAHAHAHAHAAHAHA I CHALLANGE YOU 2 DO ANOTHER 1 WITH KANAMES FANTASY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fox Warrior Ed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't belive I haven't reviewed this! I just want to say that your fic is awsome. You should do another chap or a sequel. *Nod nod*
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 18:23 CDT
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I love it. Fun with an actual story line not just hhmmm. Great way to end it too. *lol* Stroke of genuis, you leave it open for more.
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Reviewed By: Jellybob On: June 18, 2004 01:40 CDT
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This was great! You made everyone in chracter and Sagara was amusing as usual. The ending was great too. ^_______^ Awesome job! I really liked it!
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Reviewed By: wired syirm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Everyone seems to have covered the ground I was going to comment on, but really, this is great. I'm so happy to see such well written fics! I'm walking away filled with warm and fuzzy feelings.
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Reviewed By: dj_hellfire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 08:05 CDT
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Wow, i am speechless!! i thought it was awesome!! i loved the way the characters seemed just like they are in the anime, it was so easy to picture. plz write another FMP fic, because it seems that you have a lot of fans!!! Peace!
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: March 15, 2004 18:04 CST
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You should write a chapter for that. It would be interesting to see what you'd have Kaname choose.
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Reviewed By: gUls On: March 10, 2004 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10+++ it's so sweet! i was blushing right along with kaname!!! much love!
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"We are sufficiently prepared." I thought it was great the way you Sousuke in character. "It was odd that the only other person he trusted so completely was Tessa, but perhaps the unique bonds that linked the minds of the Whispered also linked their hearts." In this sentence I couldn't really understand why Sousuke wouldn't trust Tessa, his commanding officer. "he" seemed like a typo. Sorry for the nitpicking. I really enjoyed the fic.
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Reviewed By: papertiger On: January 27, 2004 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is my favorite fic on this site! if you write anymore for FMP, I'd love to read!
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Reviewed By: RedHedLvr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Yes! Yes! Finally stories about FMP!! I loved the story and thought you were right on with the characters. Hope to read more from you soon!
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Reviewed By: marnika On: January 23, 2004 01:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoyed your story ,they were kept in character and instilled with the humor from the show.Good job.
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Title: Found something fun to read
Reviewed By: Elf From Space On: January 19, 2004 03:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heeee!!! Was kind of surprised to find an interesting looking FMP fic and then see who the author was! I adore Sosuke and this was excellent. Very sweet lemon. Also very cerative details in the room, which I won't ask how you thought of all of that ^^
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Reviewed By: Sailor Centauri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is really sweet! Kaname and Sagara all the way!!
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Reviewed By: Darkened Curiousity On: December 27, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am absolutely in love with this fanfic! I see that you have only written this one fic for Full Metal Panic.. Would you please write another one? Please Please Please!
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Reviewed By: jschu25 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I'm so happy that someone is starting to write FMP fics. I simply love the anime. And you did a great chartacter job on both of them. If you write anymore about this anime, I would definitely read it. And the ending was so cute with the note. jschu25
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 22:26 CST
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i liked that! it was cute!!
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