| "Side Stories" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: TabiWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 16:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an okay story. I'll tell you it's the first one I've read with yami and Yugi having fun in their mind, but mostly what I am curious about is how Seto and Jou came to be a couple, and how they broke apart. Do you think you could do a fic with those two's story? TabiWolf
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: December 28, 2003 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was funny when Yami said Yugi feels like a child. Great. Continue, pleaze.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 13:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Eh, not bad lemon, I suppose. I hope that Joey gets back together with Seto, because while I don't mind Joey/Mai, I like Seto/Joey better.
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..............wow that second chapter was so sweet. you need to continue writing this.
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