| "Is That Vegeta?" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: The Wyrd Sister [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 21:45 CST
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One word. Formatting. The text is in the summary instead of the actual fic place. Also- PLEASE look into getting a beta. They help with this type of stuff and also your grammer. Good Luck!
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Reviewed By: Shape Shifter Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 08:11 CDT
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I Like it, But am I the only one who can read it? If I am who cares Just update!
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Reviewed By: The Divine Demoness [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 02:51 CST
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Like alot of the reveiws say the writing need to be fixed, all you have to do is put the writing in the right text, then it'll show. Hope you fix it soon it sounds like it'll be a good fic.
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Reviewed By: Ascrh Miname On: March 24, 2004 15:30 CST
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umm, you cant read this. it sounds realy interesting like ... but i can't read it
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Reviewed By: zenygata On: January 01, 2004 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
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how is this a must read fic when you can't read it
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Title: Oh no@
Reviewed By: Sozoku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 07:43 CST
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i can't read it! *crys*
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Reviewed By: DJ On: December 14, 2003 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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well you certainly get a 10 for style of writing because that is something even know i can't read symbols
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Title: ??
Reviewed By: animelove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 00:01 CST
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uh....i cant read this ....its like symbols and i'm quite sure my eyes aren't screwed
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Reviewed By: ERR On: December 05, 2003 12:31 CST
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um there's no fic. It's just symbols. You probably didn't format it correctly or something. Please check it, it sounds like an interesting read.
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Reviewed By: auther On: December 05, 2003 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I rated this fic -pg- because of a little miner violence. But anyone can read it.I appreciate all coments and i'll really try hard to write the story more so please be patient with me i have another dbz site also and thats why it takes me a while but i'll try to get it done, thanks for all your reveiws!! And keep chacking up on me!!
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Reviewed By: Krei On: December 02, 2003 17:09 CST
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Im sorry but I can't read it.Its all screwy.But I bet if I could I'd love it.Please correct the um writing cause I really want to read it.
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Reviewed By: metal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi please up date id like to read more
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