| "One-Winged Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: def3po On: December 06, 2004 23:06 CST
Comment/Review:
good story
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Reviewed By: Rodon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do know that this needs backstory for how Ranma is in this situation. ^_^
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Reviewed By: darkchun On: November 08, 2004 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy all your fanfics, and this one is no different. Keep up the amazing work, I look forward to any new fanfics or updates you produce.
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Reviewed By: Michael 'TY' Foerster On: November 03, 2004 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! Now it simply flows. Personally I'm hoping for more similary in quality, but You doing it already. (off to reading the next chapter).
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Reviewed By: koplex On: October 24, 2004 20:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
aLooking forward to more.
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Title: Update, If Alive
Reviewed By: Crimsha1080 On: September 22, 2004 03:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this particular part of the series the most, Good Job!^_^ However, you've two choices for keeping loyal fans loyal: 1) Update your stories here, or 2) Provide a link to your home page or whatever site you most commonly update your stories to. Otherwise, keep up the good work!
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Title: Update, If Alive
Reviewed By: Crimsha1080 On: September 22, 2004 03:06 CDT
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Title: Wai, there's more of it
Reviewed By: MiFo71 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm following your writing for quiet some time, and I simply come back for more. There may be some more "eloquent" writers, or some "on Teacher level" grammar freaks. But I realy like your flowing writing style. You don't ignore things like plot, research on used chars, and You pack it all in a nice Way. It's fun to read Your work. please keep it going.
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Reviewed By: Nightsurfer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2004 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good story and fine storyline as always, just what happened between this Volume and the first one? Nightsurfer
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Reviewed By: khoange On: November 29, 2003 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just like to say wow!!! I have been a fan of many of your other work and I just like to say this is the best one yet. I love the slow and careful way you develop the relationship betwwen the character. I hope you keep working on this project.
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Reviewed By: wiseman On: November 28, 2003 22:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story so far is great but you have the first 2 chapters backwards
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