| "Torn Between Two Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: bleh bleh On: August 27, 2005 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gret fic. loved the sorato
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Reviewed By: Tsubasa On: June 04, 2004 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a pretty good fanfic. I enjoyed reading it.
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Reviewed By: Writer for Hire [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 11:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've been reading the reviews and have come to the conclusion that I'm not the only one who loathes your "writing," if you can call it that. * (I've also come to the conclusion that a whole lot of idiots like to use the review system as a message board, but that is entirely beside the point...) * Okay, now I'm going to do the really misguided thing and try to be nice to your pathetic little ass: Get. Fucking. Help. Get a beta-reader, get some good ideas, and please, for God's sake, get a decent grip on grammar. I'm sure you have the potential to be a (relatively) decent writer IF you learn to proofread and IF you develop some tastefulness. * Of course, those are a pair of pretty big "ifs," but...
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Title: *sweatdrop*
Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2004 20:25 CST
Comment/Review:
all right, to make you guys happy, I was actually planning on writing a second sequel to this fic. Not that boring lovy dovey stuff between the characters but Im too lazy,I wanna finish my other fic first.
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Title: Ok
Reviewed By: Dipsy4m On: February 23, 2004 18:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Well Fine..I created a potion that wil revive them!!!!!!!!!!! Even you just a jerk. Your a jerk because your potion didnt work! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!! come alive my hotties! They will love me! MousyCat, your dead so you can't come! HAHAHAHAHAHAH your stuck!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MousyCat On: February 23, 2004 18:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey Kuramaismysweetie? How could you kill th hotties? They are dead they are with me now. So long Suckers! BWAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAH AnimeFARTday Kurama said he hates you and Matt,Hiei,Yami,Koji and etc. Imarock your just a rock!Mayo your just a mayo who likes to get licked by Kuwabara's mouth! Dipsy, your worst. your just a littl kiddy face!
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Reviewed By: Justajerk On: February 23, 2004 18:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Well i guess you girls all have to kills yourseves now. To get to the boys. Commit suicide if you have to.
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Title: Mine
Reviewed By: Kuramaismysweetie On: February 23, 2004 17:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, then nobody wants to fight with me. Well The hotties are all mine. ADio amigos! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHHAAH
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Title: Awesome fanfic
Reviewed By: KuronosuV2 On: February 03, 2004 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, incredible fanfic. I'd have to agree, makes ya' feel sorry for Tai, but as you represented (quite well I might add) hiding one's true feelings will only lead to disaster. So really he got what he deserved. All in the interpretation I guess. Great work! ^_^
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Title: Zero88
Reviewed By: Zero88 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 09:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Excellent!!! Whoo!! The drama! Now, I kinda feel sad for Tai. :( Other than that it was good. Oh, thanx for reviewing my fic. Achoo is a creep. I tried to erase his flame review, but I didn't have a good enough reason.
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Title: ATTENTION PLEASE!
Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 22:55 CST
Comment/Review:
HI, Im the author and if you just read my story and wanted to write a review but was surprised at all the fighting,please still write one. Just pretend like you didnt see anything and just tell me what you think of my story. PLEASE Thank you
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Title: NEVER!!
Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 12:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Their still mine,I still love them..You'll never take them!!WAAAHHH!!!*takes dead bodies of hotties home* "your okay,your okay" burns mousy cat's dead body BWUHAHAHAHAHAHA!! ashes to ashes!!
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Reviewed By: Mousycat On: January 11, 2004 12:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Im happy where I am. Im happy that i jumped off the cliff. Ill be peace forever with my beloved Kurama,Hiei,Matt,koji,Koichi,Yami, etc. aahhhhh
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Reviewed By: Dipsy4me On: January 11, 2004 12:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Sure if you regret you ever wanted the hotties!
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Title: WWAAAAHHH!!!!!!
Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 12:16 CST
Comment/Review:
YOur really a jerk you Justajerk!! WAAAHHH!!Come on girls let's all fight together and avenge the hottie's deaths!!!!
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