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Reviewed By: DarkAvenger On: May 09, 2005 01:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow, perhaps you should write mroe lemons then! That was really good for a second try. I'm impressed.
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Reviewed By: EvilAngel69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is short and sweet, just like some lemons should be. ^____^
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Reviewed By: ktakn On: October 13, 2004 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good. i liked it a lot. ^^ i hope oyu continue this
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Title: Something Secret
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!GREAT STORY I LOVED IT SO MUCH I GIVE 2 THUMPS UP BOY IF MY BOYFRIEND WERE HERE AND HE READ IT HE SAY THE EXACT SAME THING BUT HE AIN'T HERE BUT OH WELL AT LEAST I CAN TELL HIM ABOUT IT WHEN I GO SEE HIM ON SATURDAY AND SPEND THE NIGHT WITH HIM.THAT IS IF MY MOM DOESN'T TRY AND MAKE ME STAY HOME AND GO TO THE MALL WITH HER,GRANDMA,AND MY BROTHER ON SATURDAY BECAUSE I RATHER GO WITH HIM,SANGO,MIROKU,AND THEIR DAUGHTER WHO THEY NAMED AFTER ME.WELL LATER I'LL BE SURE TO READ YOUR OTHER STORIES.BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Something Secret
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!GREAT STORY I LOVED IT SO MUCH I GIVE 2 THUMPS UP BOY IF MY BOYFRIEND WERE HERE AND HE READ IT HE SAY THE EXACT SAME THING BUT HE AIN'T HERE BUT OH WELL AT LEAST I CAN TELL HIM ABOUT IT WHEN I GO SEE HIM ON SATURDAY AND SPEND THE NIGHT WITH HIM.THAT IS IF MY MOM DOESN'T TRY AND MAKE ME STAY HOME AND GO TO THE MALL WITH HER,GRANDMA,AND MY BROTHER ON SATURDAY BECAUSE I RATHER GO WITH HIM,SANGO,MIROKU,AND THEIR DAUGHTER WHO THEY NAMED AFTER ME.WELL LATER I'LL BE SURE TO READ YOUR OTHER STORIES.BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Orb (n.o.) On: June 12, 2004 13:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
this was such a great one-shot. It was so realistic, I loved it. The part about adjusting was so great, werid no?, I hope ot read other things by you.
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad make a series
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Reviewed By: missnikki On: December 05, 2003 05:31 CST
Comment/Review:
it was so wonderfully great...do i smell a squel to this...i think i do...write more this was so fanstically good...i want another one...i enjoyed this emancly--can't spell if it isn't obvious...me not you...your spelling was fine...a few mistakes but not many...try spellcheck next itme...i think your hands move to fast for your thougths and that how you made the mistakes...i do it to but don't worry about it...i'm not complaining and i like the oneshot...and a squel will be nice...or try your shot a actually fanfic...it you haven't already
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Reviewed By: Frozen Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 16:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good fanfic. Not OOC, not incomprehensible, not much I would do to criticize (constructively) against. You should write more lemons, you're good.
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Reviewed By: Milady On: December 03, 2003 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good... Great work...
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww, very sweet!!! update soon!!! Your story is good! ^_^
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Reviewed By: wrathchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, whatever happened, disregard my prior review as it was supposed to be for an entirely different story. *sigh* One day I'll learn to pay attention. Read this story tho so I guess I can comment on it too. Not too bad. Maybe a tad too fast but not bad.
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Title: Nifty
Reviewed By: wrathchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree about the AN's. They break up the flow of a very entertaining story. Other than that and some minor spelling/grammar errors, quite a good story thus far. I'll look forward to more
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Reviewed By: ForEvaConfused89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 11:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fanfic really good
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