| "Hawaii: Love and Commitment" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: JC On: November 30, 2003 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the thanks!!!!I'm HAPPY to hear your going for the long-hall!!CAN'T wait to see whats next!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh On: November 30, 2003 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cute!!! its so funni how her mom just shoved him into tha suit case! XD update it soon iight! ur fic is so awesome! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Cool story On: November 30, 2003 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thoroughly enjoyed what you have so far and I can't wait until you update. Please update soon!! Ja ne! ^.~ v
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Reviewed By: wrathchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to agree about the AN's. They break up the flow of a very entertaining story. Other than that and some minor spelling/grammar errors, quite a good story thus far. I'll look forward to more
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2003 23:53 CST
Comment/Review:
it's cute, though all the a/n in the middle are kinda distracting, but I really do like the story, and hope that you update soon!
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Reviewed By: JC On: November 29, 2003 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!Please update SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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