| "Hawaii: Love and Commitment" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Title: More?
Reviewed By: singlemist [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You got any more?? This always happens to me, ill start reading one and itll go for only 2 chappies. grr
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 22:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cant wait to the smut ^_^! LOL please update!
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Reviewed By: inusrosebudforlife [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
does this mean your going to start updating more
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Title: Update your Stroy!
Reviewed By: Yasha Female Demon On: June 19, 2005 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Writer, I have read your story and I like it veary much but please write more because it has been many months and you have not updated your story. ~Yasha
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Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 01:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you.~Fanilia
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Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama! (too lazy to log in...) On: April 12, 2005 05:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thisis really good so far, please write more!
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Title: Administration
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 20:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
You must delete the last chapter asking for reader input. You can email those reviewers who have an email link to personally ask, but to leave this up would be a violation of the sites rules, and as stated in the news item of 1-1-05 listed on the fanfictions front page, your account would be terminated. I do not beleive you intended to break the sites rules, so I am posting this and allowing a week for you to remove the last chapter . If not then I will have no option then to terminate the account. Looks like you have a loyal reader base and it would be a shame to terminate an account that has been a part of this site for the last year and a half.~Fanilia
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 19:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
just think of a REALLY big building with alot of mini stores inside. A few different clothing stores, music stores, even fast food places. thas all a mall really is. hope that helps, plz update.
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Reviewed By: DarkAvenger On: April 09, 2005 22:29 CDT
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oooh... poo, you stopped writting this way back in 2003. It was going so well too. Oh well, authors perogitive I suppose. Anyway, if you ever decide to write more to this let me know via email. cadkitten@gmail.com
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Reviewed By: JC On: September 12, 2004 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me again!I thougt you said you were going for the long-hall but you have not updated this fanfic for almost a year; why is that?P.S. Update SOON!! Love: JC
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Reviewed By: Missy-bee [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 17:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
yeah are you ever going to update this? Man this was a funny story.
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Reviewed By: YinYang236 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 15:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
You haven't updated since 2003?!?!?!??! Come on, update, update, update.
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Reviewed By: buffaholic On: July 25, 2004 23:16 CDT
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OMG i was sooo excited to read that fic! but then i looked and it was only three chapters!!!! and hasn't been updated since 2003!!!! grrrr i hate that so if you update maybe i'll come back and read but until then..see ya
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Reviewed By: princess_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 21:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like your story please update..I can't wait to read what happenes next.
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Title: sweet
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 03:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
o man please hurry n right more
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