| "Yuureibanashi" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 15:58 EDT
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Nice foreshadowing and background, your attention to detail continues to be great, and much appreciated. The sense of tragedy and doom surrounding Miya-chan and her mother is so thick, it bodes ill for the gang. Hope Shippou doesn't get in over his head. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: blondiexox On: December 05, 2004 20:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg my heart is pounding!! keep goin...its great so far!!!
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Reviewed By: Kissie-dono On: December 03, 2004 19:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are such a good writer. I love this story so much! I really hope you write some more soon. We'll be waiting impatiently.
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Reviewed By: Kissie-dono On: December 03, 2004 19:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are such a good writer. I love this story so much! I really hope you write some more soon. We'll be waiting impatiently.
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Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 07:10 EST
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I must say that wasn't fair, it seems she is bathing with a corpse, and you end the chapter what kind of twisted person are you?(no offence) that is just plain evil! ~Na
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 23:46 EST
Comment/Review:
I just came across this fic, and aargh! It ends in a cliffy! Your writing is excellent. I love the Kag/Inu interplay and dialogue especially. It's great to read a fic with such good detail. Please post your next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: celesvictoria007 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 19:25 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! What a terrible person you are for leaving a cliffy like that! Good writing, I'm thouroughly enjoying your story!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 18:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Don't stop now!! Cause seriously, if you don't update within the next few days (and I'm being lenient here) I WILL track you down!! AWESOME work!!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 16:10 EST
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well, what's next?! this yuureibanashi is a really good story and i can't wait to see what happens to miya (whom i have a feeling is the little girl haunting the castle, ne?) update this soon, onegai!? it's been long enough, ne?
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2004 02:03 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
K, now that I've found your fanfics, I couldn't help but love the way this story was going! But it looks like you're not going to finish it, which is a shame... This is REALLY good!
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Reviewed By: ghost_hunter_17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading you story and I loved it. I really hope you write more soon. If you could please e-mail me when you update I'd be greatful. :) Ghost Hunter
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Reviewed By: Chika-chan On: April 01, 2004 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW THAT WUZ SO GOOD AND SAD PLEASE KEEP WRITING LUV THIS FIC SO MUCH!!! HURRY HURRY DON'T LISTEN 2 ME WRITE LOL BYE
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Title: update
Reviewed By: Kagomereborn*notsignedin On: December 24, 2003 15:16 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on update, i like it please...*goes to update hers* don't forget to okay?
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Reviewed By: moroseotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 19:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got annoyed with the thought and speach partm usually ppl us ''' those instead of """ or they use italics. Makes it easier to tell the difference. I like though -- keep writing. :)
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Title: COOOL
Reviewed By: elven_dragonrider On: November 30, 2003 14:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfiction, I like your idea for the story and it is well written, hope you write the next one soon ;)
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