| "Yuureibanashi" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuamante81 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2012 12:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an excellent story with a lot of sexual tension between InuYasha and Kagome. I love how you flashback and forth between the past of the house and the present. It's so well done that you don't even have put in a page break to show that its a flashback. The only thing that saddens me is that it hasn't been updated in years. This is too good of a story to abandon. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Rocks [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2010 22:27 EDT
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This would have been a nice story to finish reading to bad it hasn't been updated in years. Oh well. On to the next adventure maybe you'll update one day.
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Title: good
Reviewed By: thyme_cat (not logged-in) On: October 30, 2007 14:34 EDT
Comment/Review:
this was good, I enjoyed reading it and I look forward to more. ^_^
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Title: COOL!!!
Reviewed By: cutekirara On: October 31, 2006 13:26 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please,please,PLEASE Update!! its so good.
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Priestess Kylie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so cool and so very original! I absolutely love it! You just have to keep writing it! I have to see what happens!!!
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Title: Hanyou_grl
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Grl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 15:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE FINNALY YOU UPDATED!!!! IVE WAITED LIKE FOREVER!!! BUT IM HAPPY YOU UPDATED ^_^ kawaii inu/ kag thing goin on ^_^ luv it! This story rocks & is on my favorits list!!! soooo UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEZZZZ THIS FIC IS AWSOME!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENES TO SHIPPO!!!! PLEZZZ UPDATE SOON!!! poor shippo he will probaly be tramatized for life T_T... Once again luv the fic soooo much! plez update & ill review more heheh ^_^v g2g i wanna polish my knife collection befor i go shopping for homecomming shoes ^_^v much luv ja ne chika!!!!
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 21:36 EDT
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I'm so glad you updated! There are so many great details in this story, it hard to single some out--the winter kimono lying in the dust amidst the chaos, Katsumi's reminiscence over her comb, Miya hiding herself in the spring...Shippo's encounter with the ghost, in the wet, dripping darkness. NICE! Hope the next chapter isn't too long in coming!
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Reviewed By: thyme_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2005 18:34 EDT
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CREEPY! ah! update please. :shivers:
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Title: KAWAII!!!!!
Reviewed By: Hanyou_Grl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 22:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUDE THIS IS SOOOOOO FUCKING AWSOME!!!!! MORE MORE MORE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS FIC ROCKX!!!!!!!! IVE BEEN WAITING LIKE FOREVER FOR YOU TO UPDATE!!!!!!!! I LUV THIS FIC!!!! ITS SO FUCKN AWSOME!!!!!! ILL TELL ALL MA FRIENDS ABOUT IT IF YOU UPDATE!!!!!!!! PLEZZZZZ!!!!!!!! WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO SHIPPO????!!!!! I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!!! PLEZ TELL ME!!!!!!! ILL REVIEW LIKE 100 TIMES IF YOU FINNISH THIS FIC!!!!!! PLEZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! well i g2g i didnt do my homework or sciece project & there due tomorrow & a power point (but i finished that i think)!!!!!!!!! damn im so fuckn stuped!!!!!! skool sux!!!!!!!! ja ne!!!!!!! luv ya all!!!!! p.s: UPDATE OR DIE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: INU-KAGLOVER, On: April 04, 2005 04:41 EDT
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Finally!! A new chapter!! I've been waiting for forever, and you at last gave me the newest update!! Yeah for you!! Bad for me... Last time I updated my story was around that time too... Guess that means I gotta go do mine now... Anywho, GREAT new chapter, I can't wait to see how Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship develops, especially under all the weird stuff going on!! I'll be waiting.... :)
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Reviewed By: blackberry [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 15:58 EDT
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Nice foreshadowing and background, your attention to detail continues to be great, and much appreciated. The sense of tragedy and doom surrounding Miya-chan and her mother is so thick, it bodes ill for the gang. Hope Shippou doesn't get in over his head. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: blondiexox On: December 05, 2004 20:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg my heart is pounding!! keep goin...its great so far!!!
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Reviewed By: Kissie-dono On: December 03, 2004 19:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are such a good writer. I love this story so much! I really hope you write some more soon. We'll be waiting impatiently.
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Reviewed By: Kissie-dono On: December 03, 2004 19:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are such a good writer. I love this story so much! I really hope you write some more soon. We'll be waiting impatiently.
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Reviewed By: draechaeli [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 07:10 EST
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I must say that wasn't fair, it seems she is bathing with a corpse, and you end the chapter what kind of twisted person are you?(no offence) that is just plain evil! ~Na
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