| "Feelings Surface" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: anabell On: April 02, 2004 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I love this story, and I might sound sick and everything, but if they want to hurt kenshin realy bad...oh lets say that soujiro disflowers her, or someone. also insted of Aoshi (not sure if thats how u spell his name) bing by himself he could take soujiro with him to help him kidnap kaoru, as you can see I like soujiro a lot, i also like kenshin, but i like sojiro better. well I hope that you update this story realy soon.
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Reviewed By: meeko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 01:26 CST
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awesome fic so far! i think kaoru should get kidnapped in the next chapter or in future chapters and kenshin fights any and all to get her back!! i think she should end in shishios grasp and thats when kenshin arrives and defeats kenshin and saves kaoru! hehhehe i can't wait to see what you do!! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: gfdsfdsb On: March 31, 2004 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story Is SO COOL! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story rocks soo soooooo much! And, no offence, but YOU HAVENT UPDATED IN FOREVER! Font Color
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Reviewed By: khrisofer_kolumbus [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello I hope that you get out of your writers block thing soon cuz I can't wait to see what happens also do I sense a lemon in the next few chapters? I hope so cuz I don't think that Kenshin can wait much longer!^-^
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Reviewed By: treyhtrhhre On: March 25, 2004 20:33 CST
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PLS UPDATE SOON! I thiskn this tory rocks, it would be awsome if ytou turned it into a lemon! Its been monthes since you last updated/1 PLSPLSPSLSPSLSPSLS UPDATE SOON!1
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Reviewed By: ykuki On: March 25, 2004 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLS PLS PLS REVEIW SOON!!!!!! This story is so cool! It would be so awsomne if you turned it into a lemon. You havn't updated in MONTHES! please, it's driving us all crazy! Update soon, pls PLS PLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLSPLS!!!!!
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Reviewed By: t67u85jh On: March 24, 2004 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u must update soon! this story rocks! pls update soon! u havent updated in like forever! this is the greatest story! I think it would be great if u turned it into a lemon. when is kaoru gonna get kidnapped or something? Oh, I cant wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: u5eruj56uj On: March 24, 2004 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please update! This is just plain wonderful! Oh, and I think it would be great if this became a lemon *blushed furiously* Shimashita! I just love lemons. I also love Kenshin Kaoru fsnfics. *_* *gets dreamy look in eyes*
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Reviewed By: 89p79ouiy On: March 11, 2004 15:56 CST
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This is awasome! the only problem is, you havent updated! its been monthes! pls hurry up, oh, and i think it would be cool if u turned this into a lemon
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Reviewed By: iouyluil On: March 11, 2004 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooooo cooooooooolllllll! You have to update! Please???????????? Is this going to be a lemon later on? I am ashamed of it, but I love lemons. Please hurry up and write the next chapter! It's driving us all crazy!
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Reviewed By: hgfkjjh On: March 11, 2004 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh! Please, weve all waited soooolong! Please update soon! We are your loyal fans, and your keeping us wating! I'm not mad, but its been months since you last updated! Please update soon! And I think it would be really good if you turned this into a lemon.
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Reviewed By: uytrujtrujtr On: March 11, 2004 08:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooooo cooooooooolllllll! You have to update! Please???????????? Is this going to be a lemon later on? I am ashamed of it, but I love lemons. Please hurry up and write the next chapter! It's driving us all crazy!
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Title: Brukaoru
Reviewed By: Brukaoru (not logged in) On: January 20, 2004 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You MUST continue soon! This is a really good story! Please?!?!?!?
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Title: good fic! But needs something.
Reviewed By: reene24 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Only problems I have is, that there is too much going on at once per chapter. The chapters are too short to completely sum the actions taking place. So, it kind of left me a little in the dark in some places. You should have brought Shishio and Saitoh in sooner, that probably would have made it better. Aoshi was a little OOC, but that's ok. I do have to compliment that you have good ideas. The way you have Battousai is great. He is so possessive, that's the part that really draws the reader in. The parts with Kaoru and Battousai are hot, so there is no need for a complete lemon, just keep them the way they are. I think lemon will not help the story, but actually ruin it. Over all, if you really put hard effort into it. More like the die hard writers, who take a month to write a chapter. This story could reach a fuller potential. And believe me, this story has GREAT potential and epic written on it. It just needs a little TLC. I just hope you don't take this as a negative review, because I really am entertained.
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Reviewed By: innyubabe4e [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 19:31 CST
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possesive is rite. You think thats sexy? I think thats homicidal.
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