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Reviewed By: celestial samurai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2005 23:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I like the story Please update and is kenshin gonna stay Battousai forever. as much as i like Battousai, I love the rurouni too.
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Title: My Review(duh!)
Reviewed By: Hanabi jou [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! I loved it! Don't writers' block and school get to ya! I have both of those problems and they can pose a real pain in the ass for me, someone who loves to write. So anyway, this is what I think you should do with the story: Sano, Megumi, and Yahiko can follow Kaoru and Kenshin's trail to the first place they stayed in. That's where Soujiro meets up with Sano, Megumi, and Yahiko. Sano and Soujiro fight. Soujiro knocks Sano out and Megumi and Yahiko drag him to a nearby clinic and have him treated. Meanwhile, Kenshin is fighting Aoshi along with the whole Oniwabanshuu, and a certain little ninja girl sneaks in and captures Kaoru. At Shishio's HQ, Misao and Kaoru become friends, and Misao sees the errors of her lord's way and tries to figure out a plan with Kaoru to go against Shishio and his minions. After that, I honestly don't know where to go from there...but somewhere in there, please give Kaoru a bokuto and make her fight, too. No one wants their second favorite female character playing the role of a helpless sheep! P.S. My favorite character is Misao. Ja`ne!
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Reviewed By: Nette [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope school and writer's block won't stop you from continuing this story because you need to UPDATE this story soon. Wow! It is so good! I love how possessive Battousai is. You've got to stop holding out on us and update this story! ;) I've read quite a bit of RK stories and I can definitely say this story is one of the best I've read. You've got great command on your writing. So, PLEASE, don't deprive us fans of a great story by a talented writer! ;)
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 14:14 CDT
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U'm SO sorry if I sound mean,. but could you PLEASE update? It's been like three months. You left us hanging at a good part. *sniff* Your stories are so good, but you take forever to write them :'(
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Reveiw...please?
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: fire_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 17:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok it will be karou gets kidnapped by shiso and so forth as soon as i fiigure on how to write it
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: fire_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 16:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey they will only let me see the first ten reviews so please mail me your reviews thanks www.dark_angel_10302@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: WolfGirlWins72821 On: April 17, 2004 12:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Urg, well, I think that Sojiro or Sissio should kidnap Kaoru. Then, I think that he should try to *ehem* but Kenshin gets there in tmie and stops him.
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Title: Gross
Reviewed By: Lalalala325 On: April 15, 2004 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I think that Sojiro should kidnap Kaoru and bring her to Sisshio. Then I think that he should torture her and harrass her body...er...But not exactly finish the job, her first time should be with Kenshin...yeah...and I think that Kenshin should find Sissio in the act of *ehem* and stop him before he finishes, but I don't think Aoishi should come, it would kind of ruin the rmantic moment......I've asid too much...
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Title: dsv
Reviewed By: sfdvfd On: April 15, 2004 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Soujiro should kidnap Kaoru, I don't think that Aoishi would right now, what with all she's done for him.
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Reviewed By: kougaismine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhh..shiso should kidnape kauro and do what kenshin wanted to do to her(u know what i mean)
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Reviewed By: kougaismine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like deer meat..that stuff is good...lol
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Title: Raspberry
Reviewed By: WolfGirl3746372891 On: April 09, 2004 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, Sojiro should kidnap Kaoru! After all, it was his job in the first place. And maybe he like, really hurts Kaoru or something and Kenshin get's all pissed off and goes after him, then fights, blah blah blah, but then Sojiro ends up getting away with Kaoru, and Kenshin has to go after her AGAIN...hmm..enough said
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Title: reyre
Reviewed By: utyutyhr On: April 08, 2004 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Soujiro should kidnap Kaoru and torture her or something, Aoshi's just to nice...well, kinda...when he wants to be.
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Title: jfhgjd
Reviewed By: fthgfdhgfdh On: April 08, 2004 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry if it sounds like I'm writing the story, but here's an idea :Soujiro kidnapps Kaoru because Aoshi wouldn't do it. And of course, Kenshin has to go after him....I love this fic!
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