| "Feelings Surface" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 14:14 CDT
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U'm SO sorry if I sound mean,. but could you PLEASE update? It's been like three months. You left us hanging at a good part. *sniff* Your stories are so good, but you take forever to write them :'(
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Reviewed By: WolfGirl72821 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 14:39 CDT
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Reveiw...please?
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: fire_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 17:03 CDT
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ok it will be karou gets kidnapped by shiso and so forth as soon as i fiigure on how to write it
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: fire_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 16:57 CDT
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hey they will only let me see the first ten reviews so please mail me your reviews thanks www.dark_angel_10302@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: WolfGirlWins72821 On: April 17, 2004 12:41 CDT
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Urg, well, I think that Sojiro or Sissio should kidnap Kaoru. Then, I think that he should try to *ehem* but Kenshin gets there in tmie and stops him.
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Title: Gross
Reviewed By: Lalalala325 On: April 15, 2004 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, I think that Sojiro should kidnap Kaoru and bring her to Sisshio. Then I think that he should torture her and harrass her body...er...But not exactly finish the job, her first time should be with Kenshin...yeah...and I think that Kenshin should find Sissio in the act of *ehem* and stop him before he finishes, but I don't think Aoishi should come, it would kind of ruin the rmantic moment......I've asid too much...
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Title: dsv
Reviewed By: sfdvfd On: April 15, 2004 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Soujiro should kidnap Kaoru, I don't think that Aoishi would right now, what with all she's done for him.
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Reviewed By: kougaismine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uhh..shiso should kidnape kauro and do what kenshin wanted to do to her(u know what i mean)
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Reviewed By: kougaismine [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 19:05 CDT
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i like deer meat..that stuff is good...lol
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Title: Raspberry
Reviewed By: WolfGirl3746372891 On: April 09, 2004 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, Sojiro should kidnap Kaoru! After all, it was his job in the first place. And maybe he like, really hurts Kaoru or something and Kenshin get's all pissed off and goes after him, then fights, blah blah blah, but then Sojiro ends up getting away with Kaoru, and Kenshin has to go after her AGAIN...hmm..enough said
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Title: reyre
Reviewed By: utyutyhr On: April 08, 2004 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Soujiro should kidnap Kaoru and torture her or something, Aoshi's just to nice...well, kinda...when he wants to be.
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Title: jfhgjd
Reviewed By: fthgfdhgfdh On: April 08, 2004 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry if it sounds like I'm writing the story, but here's an idea :Soujiro kidnapps Kaoru because Aoshi wouldn't do it. And of course, Kenshin has to go after him....I love this fic!
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Reviewed By: anabell On: April 02, 2004 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I love this story, and I might sound sick and everything, but if they want to hurt kenshin realy bad...oh lets say that soujiro disflowers her, or someone. also insted of Aoshi (not sure if thats how u spell his name) bing by himself he could take soujiro with him to help him kidnap kaoru, as you can see I like soujiro a lot, i also like kenshin, but i like sojiro better. well I hope that you update this story realy soon.
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Reviewed By: meeko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 01:26 CST
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awesome fic so far! i think kaoru should get kidnapped in the next chapter or in future chapters and kenshin fights any and all to get her back!! i think she should end in shishios grasp and thats when kenshin arrives and defeats kenshin and saves kaoru! hehhehe i can't wait to see what you do!! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: gfdsfdsb On: March 31, 2004 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story Is SO COOL! YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story rocks soo soooooo much! And, no offence, but YOU HAVENT UPDATED IN FOREVER! Font Color
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