| "What's Mistletoe Anyway?" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: InuyashasLoverTigerLily [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2005 11:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would give you a higher rating...That was sooooooo cute. i hope you continue to write stories!! i know i'll be reading them!!
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Title: *applause*
Reviewed By: Emie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 21:26 CST
Comment/Review:
I can so see Inuyasha and Kagome doing that. And just think if Grandpa bought up some eggnog??? Oh, the possibilities of being embrassassed. Anyway, good job. I liked it...for what it was worth
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 17:24 CDT
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That was so sweet, I just love the way you handled the lemon! Great job! I'm going out and buying some mistletoe right now!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 15:14 CST
Comment/Review:
LOVED IT!
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Reviewed By: Gothic Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol, I'll have to remember that one ;)
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Title: what's mistletoe anyway?
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so cute:D...that was great:D
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Reviewed By: Sandro666 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.k., first off everybody loves lemons, but this should really just be the 7/16 part of a nice and long story. Since its one shot, this doesn't really matter (Its really a suggestion that writing more gets more most of the time). O.k. your begining was a little hasty, but if this is your first thats o.k. If you want to write good than you have to write a lot, if this aint your first and you made it in the backseat of the car or you just did a quick sketch, this is fine. But as a writer to writer, you need more detail. My story is kinda quick but most beginings need to be. Like a movie, you don't like to sit and stare for the first two hours still waiting for the first action scene. Your story was a little to quick but it got the point across sorta. Making a oneshot can be hard, but at the same time easy. Just three parts really. Begining, sex and more sex with a quick ending. All I'm saying is just that this was good, but try to spice things up if you know what I mean. If you have any q's just email me at sandyblackhawk@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummmm, well, it- it's uh..... yeah. You gotta work on that. First of all, what's with the touchey-feely stuff at the beginning. Inuyasha is very ooc. and Kagome just jumps into bed with him? what about adressing the whole inu/kag/kik triangle? what about the fact that inuyasha would have smelled, or heard her family when he was by the well, with his demon senses. I'm sorry, but i can most certainly say that i have read better lemons.
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