| "The Broken Spell And A Surrendered Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Rainstorm61879
Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A pointless slightly lemony piece of fluff. I Liked it. BTW The first line is not meant to be an insult so don't take offence. I usually don't enjoy one shots but this one was good. To many leave off in way that it seems like it's in the middle of the story. Yours came to a nice neat and clean closing. Good job. I'll have to look for any more works you have done
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 15:03 CST
Comment/Review:
LOVED IT!
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Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2004 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
You rushed the lemon take your time and add a plot to it. Then next time would be better.
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummmmm. Yeah, a couple of plot holes. Very OOC for the both of them, and some stuff that made me say "That's just awful" I mean, KAGOME IS 16!! she's far too young to be doing that. and NO ONE does that two minutes after they meet, except if they're getting paied, or are extremely drunk! The lemon was rushed, but i guess it was ok.
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Reviewed By: bloodroseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 21:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good!! I hope you continue to write more stories b/c you're a great writer.
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