| "Pretender." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 07:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
cute story i like the different elements...aya and his posessiveness with yohji on the dance floor, jealousy of yohji and manx and the denial of his (aya's) feelings at the end...i'd b up to a sequel
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2004 22:46 CST
Comment/Review:
this fic is so cute n yet so sad
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 22:40 CST
Comment/Review:
very good!!
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Reviewed By: GoldenTears [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a wonderful job writing this fanfic! You should deffinatly keep writing! -GoldenTears-
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Reviewed By: NekoHope [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 11:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice! I liked it a lot. You certainly suprised me with Yohji in a miniskirt..... Mmm...
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Reviewed By: V On: December 01, 2003 06:05 CST
Comment/Review:
That sizzled (as in hot). ^_^
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