| "By the Cycles of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sakouya [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! nice story... when's the next chapters going to come? i hope soon but i can find other things to do after i read your "hiatus note" well nice story...
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Title: dude this is cool
Reviewed By: inu yashas witch [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude this is cool hope u write more and if your a girl sorry for calling u dude dudette
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Title: what the hell?
Reviewed By: Yumemiru/Amanda On: July 02, 2004 00:02 CDT
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My computer dident let me finish!!! :( Anyways your doing great!
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Title: You go girl ^.^
Reviewed By: yumemiru/Amanda On: July 02, 2004 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know what?Your right! When I used to write fan fics,it was hard for me to update everyday. You are writing a great story here,and I as a fellow author,and a
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Title: (L)
Reviewed By: Kizu On: June 30, 2004 08:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update- I love your story and all the chapters! We all love yout story!! ^^
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Reviewed By: EvilPanda On: June 25, 2004 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the stiry but u pezz finsh it i cant spell today dum day to me
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Title: it was getting good
Reviewed By: KiogoIceFoxFireWolfHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay that was getting good Shadow: its all ways getting good and then you have to wait but wheres Yano.hes cool. Kiogo: he was so cutie and half coyote my thierd favrite animal.but he still is cutie. Shadow: Oi you said i was cutier than anything *starts to pout* Kiogo: *blushes* i did when did i say that? *blush gets bigger* Shadow: two days ago why? Kiogo: i thought you didn't here me. well neways.... Shadow&Kiogo: SEE YA
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 05:11 CDT
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hm... as far as your comments go, one is their own worst critic. In any case the story seems relatively realistic as far as the characters go. Miroku is a little off but what do I know about demon bloods affect on a human? You are the author of this story and take pride in this. Don't worry, even if people complain they'll read. I know I'm amoung them.
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Reviewed By: L On: June 15, 2004 01:32 CDT
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Very very good. A very big improvement from earlier chapters. Keep writing like this, and all will be well ^_^
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Brennen_Sie_Drachen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hello!! I know how personal life can get in the way. It sucks. I will wait as patiently as I can ok. I really enjoy reading your fic ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 14, 2004 18:18 CDT
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Hope you have an excellent break, look forwards to reading more when you return. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Title: Thats a good idea
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 17:17 CDT
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Well I say its better to take a brake then to let the story brake so you take the time you need, maybe veg out one a couple of days of Inuyasha and get inspired to finish this story with a bang. I like the whole Idea of Miroku and Inuyasha being full demon, but I think that in the last couple of chapters its been a little to focused on the animal instincts, and not their personalitys. What do you think it would be like on the inside of Miroku's mind if he killed some kids intire family. Maybe some emotional turmoil is in order, a struggle with is demon self. I see so much potential for this story so please I hope you find the insperation that you need. I'm keeping this story on my favs so you at least have me still waiting for more. Ja
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Title: By the Cycles of the Moon
Reviewed By: Beauty2004 *not signed in* On: June 14, 2004 16:25 CDT
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Ur story is soo awesome. I hope that you update soon and not in a couple of months...Anyway, i don't think your story is bad like u do, hope you realize that ^_^
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Reviewed By: EvilPanda On: June 14, 2004 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stoury as long as the next part does dont take to long i would like to see how it end keep writing its good
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie (Not signed in...) [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 12:08 CDT
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I totally understand! I love your story too much to just abandon you! Just take your time and I'll be ready to read when you are ready to post again! I still think you are a great writer so don't give up! I'll just be patient and be waiting for your return! So take care! :)
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