| "By the Cycles of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: LeeLu On: June 14, 2004 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bah! who cares about those that will leave? that just means they don't realize that you're human. LOL I'll hang around patiently cuz I'm used to it with all these stories I'm reading! Take as much time as you need to make it a great story! Good luck! *waves* ^_^
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed in i think* [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 03:42 CDT
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Don't worry I vill never leave you! lol i like your story vay to much! Vho cares about the oocness, as long as it's a good story it's fine. Don't vorry about not updating fast enough, some good stories are left vith an evil cliffy that they never complete. Life issues are to be expected and don't think that you should have to put your life on hold for just some story. It doesn't vork that vay. lol i think i'm really hilarious by replacing all the "W" with "V" lol vell, update as soon as you are able, but trust me, if people really like your story as they say they do in the reviews, then they von't abandon you or else they are just big stupid, meanies vho are big stupid meanies! lol well i honestly think that's enough of my opinions so yeah, Love the story! Krystal.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 23:58 CDT
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Who is telling you that we are not happy with your work!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! They lied big time!!!!!!!! I loved the last few chapters, the whole story in fact!!!!!!!!!!!! But if you feel that you need to take some time and brainstorm that's fine too, you're not going to lose me as a reader. But I don't think you should let one person stink up everything. You shouldn't change your story to please this one person who was too afraid to even put their name, your story should please YOU.Go and find your muse so you can come back quick because that last cliffie was really evil!!!!! ^_^ Love ya!!!
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Reviewed By: What happened? On: June 13, 2004 21:34 CDT
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This story used to excite me. The first few chapters were wonderful. However, I can't seem to get excited about it anymore because it has not lived up to its potential and has such infrequent updates. I am not sure whether it is because you are trying to drag out the story because you want more reviews or if you have just lost a direction for your plot or if you honestly think the plot twists and extra people make your story better. They do not. It seems like this story has lost its momentum and is just stagnating in overly dramatic dialogue and pointless action. I have lost interest in it. This is not a flame. It is only my opinion. I hope you can redeem this story and make it as good as the first chapters promised it could be. Good luck.
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Reviewed By: Hououza On: June 13, 2004 18:05 CDT
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O_o That was very very evil! Excellent chapter! Hope Kagome is alright! Good luck & best wishes, Hououza
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon *not signed on* On: June 13, 2004 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! that was a great chapter. Please keep up the great work and get the next chapter up asap. I can't wait! Krystal.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: InuyashaGirlie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this was a really good chapter! No, scratch that...great chapter! I feel so bad for Inuyasha though and I'm so scared for Kagome...I hope nothing really terrible happens to her. And yes you did make Naraku really evil, he was also really creepy too...licking that spiders blood and Hitachi's too. Well anyway loved the chapter, please update again when you can! :)
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 03:29 CDT
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At first I really liked this story and I patiently waited for updates because it was so good. However, these last couple of chapters have really been disappointing for me. The story is starting to be all over the place with extra characters we have never heard of before instead of focused on Inuyasha and Kagome like in the beginning. I don't know that I will be following it anymore. I'm sorry. That's just the way I feel about it.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 13, 2004 00:06 CDT
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Ooooooohhhhhh Aaaaaaahhhhhhhh nice chapter!!! Very good lemon and plot twist with a little Naraku at the end. Yup I give you a nine out of ten for that one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 23:44 CDT
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*Starts to act like annoying seagulls from Finding Nemo* Update?...Update?...Update Update?...Update?
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: Jackie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY GREAT STORY!I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT!PLZ UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!HERES MY EMAIL : xo_ur_dream_gurl_xo@hotmail.com!!!PLZ PLZ IF ITS NOT TOO MCH TROUBLE,EMAIL ME! JACKIE
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Reviewed By: Sam_Sama_Death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 11:13 CDT
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'Nother chapter 'nother chapter! Come come, on with the story! Pwease? Pwetty Pwease? T_T I've just-just fallen in l-love with this story!!!!! T_T.... please continue?
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Reviewed By: blahbl On: May 30, 2004 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story!im ouvin it...o get some lemon in here!muahahahahha!:D! plz email me when u update k?xo_ur_dream_gurl_xo@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Opheila [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u gotta update soon!!! btw great work!!!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: Lunar_Storm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please your gonna update it soon i cant wait to know what happends next
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