| "Frozen Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was very very well done (and quite sad... :( )! You used a lot of nifty descriptive words, which I feel makes all writing come to life if used correctly ^-^ And, by the way, I think that the snippet of Dark and Dai-chan was a wonderful way to make the ending all the more beautifyl, dramatic, and sad (I don't know if that was what you had been intending to do, but that's what it felt like happened ^-^). As for the rating of an over all being only a 9, that's because I don't like to give out perfect 10's unless the story was one of those that makes a person wonder if it is even humanly possable to write like that (I've only encountered one of those so far though... ^^; ), so it's nothing against you or this wonderful fic. Overall, I greatly enjoyed reading this story, keep up the good work! *-^
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Reviewed By: Amaya Vallance On: August 08, 2005 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was sooo sad. But I loved it! It reflected perfectly on how both Satoshi-sama and Krad-dono feel and the odd relationdship between Dai-chan an Satoshi-sama. I really hope you make a sequel! ^_^ Like Dai has a dream that Satoshi-sama is in pain and hurting and goes to look for him or something. Anyways great fic.
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Reviewed By: shamenteen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would also like to put in a vote that Hiwatari-kun will be saved or is alive the next day. I want him and Dai-chan to be together!^-^
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Reviewed By: shamenteen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiwatari-kun, I feel so sorry for him. *cries* I hope you do make a continuation of this. Now I'm going to sit on my bd and cry because Hiwatari-kun is dead and Dai-chan is alone. *cries some more*
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Reviewed By: Dark the black wings On: April 07, 2005 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man I love this story! I'd think it'd be a great idea if Daisuke saved Satoshi though...
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Reviewed By: Kouga_Lover_3056 (forgot to sign in) On: March 13, 2005 21:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, that was so sad! It totally reflected Satoshi's emotions, you should really make a sequal! I want to see how Daisuke feels after Satoshi's death, or if Daisuke will save him! It was so good, you absolutely have to! *teary eyes*! And who ever cheerlin* is well she is so wrong, this one shot is one of the best I've ever read!
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Reviewed By: cheerlin* On: July 30, 2004 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
It sucked... precious and beautiful Satoshi died... I can never forgive you
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Reviewed By: PB On: February 24, 2004 17:51 CST
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This was so sad! Hiwatari-kun's gonna die (or not)!!! He's my favorite character!
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Reviewed By: cyber videl On: December 29, 2003 06:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! this was really sad yet i really liked it a lot. With all of the emotion going on i almost started crying my eyes out poor satoshi...You made krad so mean...-_-' well it's true that he is not very nice. I thought that this was an awesome story even if it was sad. I really hope that you right more cause i'll read them... ^-^
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Reviewed By: Silent Cherub [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 03:05 CST
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Ahh, such a sad story! It was good though, good but sad. Well done! :) And even though I feel sorry for Satoshi, I still love Krad. He's great and... dead? Hm... Something inside tells me that he won't be killed so easily. ^__^ Anyway, keep up the good work, eh?
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