| "Stuck On You" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: remy2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story...very nice
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Title: Kawaii! ^_^
Reviewed By: Seto_YamiMyLovers [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww......Kawaii! This is the first Marik and Yami pairing fic. i have read.It shows much anguish,and i cracked up in the first seven chapters. You are right,Marik is a bit OOC in this fic.Especially when he was telling Yami that Yugi and Bakura were lovers.(First time i read that pairing too.)I really enjoyed this fic.,hope you continue a sequel! (*Hint Hint* *In tiny voice* Maybe a little anguish of Yami finding out Marik at first wanted to break his heart? *Frowns* Just an idea.*Shrugs*) P.S. Can i write a one-shot about Marika having no past and stuff? I felt such pity upon him in the part where he cries finally realizing that he has no past...Reply please. Harika Huynh. P.S. You're on my favs.
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Title: Excellent!!
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2004 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really good, loved the fic. I love how you tried to explain why Marik is the way he is. Though,Isn't Marik Malik's creation? Like Marik doesnt have a past because he was with Malik the whole time. That's what I understand about all this lol. But anyway loved the story, can't wait to read some of your others.
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Reviewed By: white blossom On: January 26, 2004 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best story I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!! There is absoultley no way any other story can compare to this! At first I thought the coupling was weird, but after I read it I loved it! Please add one more chapter to this. I need to know Bakura's reaction to this, and if Marik was really just using Yami, or if he really loved him. This is way great! ^ ^ p.s.- I want that Yami cat. He was sooo Kawaii, ESPECIALLY when he turned into Yami *hentai smile*
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ohhh yeah ride him Yami! Was Bakura the other voice? I have a pretty good idea who the one was.
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: December 05, 2003 09:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was fun i can't wait to find out the tomb robbers expression - more soon please
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