| "Falling Back" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kaos999 On: August 23, 2005 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More Please...Very intresting would like to read the rest...
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Grifter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This was pretty good. I have yet to watch most of the Kenshin series and have only seen the first Samurai X dvd; so I am not sure how most of these characters would look. I can picture Kenji, somewhat, but am lost at the rest. For the name of the sister, I have a few choices for you. Hitomi, Ayne, Kasumi, or Ichigo. Though the last may seem more like a guys. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: KireiShinigami On: December 25, 2003 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your grammar could use some work, but the plot line seems interesting. ^.- Maybe Enishi's sister could be named Miu, or what about Kiri? Kiri Yukishiro....sounds interesting, ne? Well, hope to read an update soon. ^^
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Title: so much better than first chapter
Reviewed By: mek mek On: December 25, 2003 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Ame, Sorry but the first chapter kinda sucked (probably b/c im stupid and don't understand anything). This one was soo good though. The fight scenes had really good imagery, I could see it in my mind. I thought it was kinda odd that Kenji sorta seemed like he was gonna rape the nameless girl, but then she said she liked him still so I guess it was all my imagination. I hope you continue this series. I wanna know her name! You know it has to be a really good name now! Hope I made you feel better now that you have reviews. Good Job, Mek Mek
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Title: yay!!!
Reviewed By: animelove(not logged in) On: December 16, 2003 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good...as i expected...^_^
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Title: hey this is good
Reviewed By: animelove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if your gonna have kenji chased by girls, i say he deserves it...cause he's probably hot...like kenshin was. Hey, what happened to kenshin anyhow?
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