| "Arwen's spirit" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Kayzer76th [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 23:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice twist on the LOTR! Your creativity is very amusing. Though I don't like Arwen deserve such treatment, yet it is quite amusing. Probably you already know that the Orcs were the elves who were tortured beyond recognition by Melkor. A offspring of a Uruk-hai and a elf? I don't know! Please continue to write a new story! You can do it!
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Reviewed By: Enros [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2004 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
It would have been better had it been more original, as it stands you have copyied many of the plot scenarios and events directly from 'Body and Spirit' - even in some places exact phrases. In addition your portrayal of a woman's response to rape is highly unrealistic. Your writing style itself shows some promise however, and I am sure, with a little more effort, you would be capable of creating something much better and more wholly your own. Greater attention to spelling and grammar would also not be amiss.
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Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story. These things can happen. Very good. I hope to read more of this story.
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