| "Sex, Ramen, ans Smiles" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2006 19:21 CDT
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I liked the way you wrote this. It was in first person, and I liked how you brought out the characteristics of each member of the group. (Even Kakashi.) I keep hopping that someday, the 'Sakura finds out' fic will end up with a Sakura who 'just doesn't care.' But alas, all I can do is hope. Not saying that how you made Sakura react was bad, I actually loved it. The sex wasn't graphic either. And that was something that made me appriciative. I do find happiness in a well written sex scene, but one that is sapposed to be more lovey-dovey and romantic such as this fic, doesn't need all that extra crudeness. Glad I stumbled apon this. Ja!
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 05:58 CST
Comment/Review:
It was good. Loved the paring. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Spawn of Hell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2005 16:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
neat.cute. adorable. yay!!!!
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Reviewed By: sasunaru_ai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2005 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this, it was really really cute =P
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Reviewed By: hikari_enzeru On: January 11, 2005 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! that was GREAT! man i loooved it! 'that' was just kawaii! just awwwwwww please write more. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: July 27, 2004 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh what a perfect way to end it, now that's love, baby.
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Reviewed By: bluesnarf [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2004 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really kyute!! I loved it! You definately deserve more reviews for this!
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Title: IT ROCKED!
Reviewed By: Too lazy to log in On: May 26, 2004 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great, and I agree, totally short and sweet! This was definantly well written monologue! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: ice-lolli333 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww....that was cute! ^-^ very short and sweet.
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Reviewed By: Rubianjiri-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 00:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
only one review?! come on ppl!!!!!!! ur fic was awesome!!!! keep it up!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Zarbonia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 14:31 CST
Comment/Review:
that was cool for a one-shot even though i'm to fond of them (i mean one-shot, not naruto and sasuke parings)
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