| "Kits, Cats, and Ryu" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: SSTR87 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, i love this story, and since this guy/girl/whatever is unfortunately retired, I'm gonna run it by a few of my buddy fanfic authors (DB Sommers, Trella, Jim Bader, CrystalBlaze), stuff it and continue it. LWH
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Reviewed By: Starfall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 01:08 CDT
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aww looks like no one has read this in an aweful long time it is well worth the read now if only it was completed. You are still around writing right? and will one day add to the story please =)
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 00:55 CDT
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This fic hits a very intersting idea, sadly it fails to really follow through with it. Not only do events happen so fast with almost no detail the readers are left asking huh? But the speed of this fic also makes some rather out of character moments, without any real explinations to back it up. Most the events could of happend, but especialy the intial dialog and build up of the three guys and the 'animal viliage' bit could of used a lot more effort to explain it so the readers could believe those changes a little more easily. Then of course this fic is several years old and marked complete I doubt we will see it continue.
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Reviewed By: TShrieken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that Ranma should end up with Hinata, cause she's closer to his own age. Also, Naruto might end up with Sakura, for obvious reasons. I can't think of anyone for Recca, though. Also, if you still need a reader, I know al three series completely. Read them all the way through, so I know the characters. If you want to contact me, email at torishrieken@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Felicity_Angel46 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 18:00 CDT
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I love your story so much!!! I really hope to read more soon! :3
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Reviewed By: SilverShinwa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE This story is cool. You should update soon!
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Title: Umm...Tense please.
Reviewed By: Ryushi Nigami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I like this story, but the flow of your sentences are not quite what I'm used to. In fact, One might say that your tense is much to present for a good flow. If anything, revising your story in the past tense would help greatly. (^^; I used to write in present tense until this little fact was pointed out, and now my writing is so much better XD)
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Reviewed By: akumagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 00:59 CST
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NARUTOxSASUKE! NARUTOxSASUKE! NARUTOxSASUKE! or sasunaru whatever you prefer. and if you do put ranma with either hinata or anko, i'd prefer if it were hinata. anko just seems too old and hinata is just too cute. also UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! please?
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Reviewed By: neosildrake On: July 17, 2005 05:24 CDT
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hey! you haven't written another chapter for over 18 month! This story is great. I like team animal. about time someone kicks asses! and those animal-forms... purrrr....
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Reviewed By: ninja art On: July 01, 2005 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good story, but its got a focus mainly on ranma. put more in about naruto. all this story needs is more details, on the surroundings and characters. update soon, its very good!
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 04:39 CST
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dude this story rocks but how about a super form for each of the animal forms, kind of like were-creatures, big strong muscular fast extreme healing due to the massive energy contained in it lets see some heavenly dragon ascension, yay!
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Reviewed By: megahellfire2002 On: February 12, 2005 15:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Over all good story. detail fight b/w ranma and lee. in some cases u rushed, for example the scene where ranma's team get the scroll and just leaves, susake's team just follows the path ranma created, there was no orochumaro (sp?). u did not get into other teams. a excellent story usually covers a lot of things and them into a final end. hopefully u'll update. it's been over a year since you haven't updated.
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Title: Uuuuwaaahhh !!!!
Reviewed By: Snowy Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 02:58 CDT
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Why don't you update???? UUuuuwwwwwaaahhhhh!!!!! I'm not gonna write any review to you until you update. Plz Update!
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Reviewed By: naru/hina fan On: September 06, 2004 22:07 CDT
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naruto should be paired with hinata and um that's it bye now hehehe
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Title: cool story, and i thought of some pairings for you
Reviewed By: rose whip lash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(stupid login wouldn't work so i had to make it anonymous) cool, i really like the story, and i think these pairings might work: Ranma/Anko(there ages are pretty close, so i think its a good idea, a 16/17(not really sure) and 12 year old is not right O_o) Naruto/Temari(she's used to living with a demon(A.K.A: Gaara), so she probably wouldn't mind having to live with Naruto) Recca/TenTen(i thought it might be a good pairing)
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Reviewed By: Johnvitt On: July 06, 2004 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of all the is holy! UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! PLease?
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Title: I'm Back for the updates!!!
Reviewed By: Snowy Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2004 00:29 CDT
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Hei... did I miss anything? No.... when will ya update??? do update. . . . . .
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Reviewed By: Luna Rose On: April 29, 2004 07:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your fanfic alot, and would be hoping for updates very soon. Though you have one or two grammatical and spelling errors, you have done very well. Please update, i am looking forward to reading more of this excellent fanfic.
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Reviewed By: Arial On: April 07, 2004 00:51 CDT
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Ranma matchups, eh? got to be Anko, Hinata just doesn't have enough character. Anko on the other hand has loads of potential, not to mention a very predatorial nature.
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Reviewed By: Earthy93 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2004 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am big fan of all three of your founding animes, Flame of Recca, Ranma, and Naruto, and I have to say not many people can do them justice, but your first three chapters sure do. Please keep writing more, I love it!
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Title: Pre-reading
Reviewed By: Yuki Maxwell On: March 06, 2004 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your fic, and would like to pre read for you. My e-mail is enclosed. Yukimaxwell@hotmail.com I hope to get the next installment soon.
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Reviewed By: Snowy Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 05:00 CST
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Yo yo.... update I say ya.... update.... When will ya update -_- ? Update plz update update update update update update...........AND I'm gonna say it again don't leave a good story ends just like that.... please update.ratings for writes attitude... I've just give you 5..... GO AND JUST UPDATE!!! ...~_~
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Title: Update
Reviewed By: powerpo [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2004 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, not many people are willing to use this combanation, but you have made it great. Also I would be willing to pre-read for you. setahimura@yahoo.com
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Title: Updat....e
Reviewed By: Snowy Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 00:24 CST
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Man Will ya update??? *_* If you don't update, I, myself gonna be out-of-touch of the net because it gonna be 3 months of holiday semester again and have gonna have help my parent again... hai hai To the point GO AND UPDATE As Soon As Possible (A.S.A.P)...... I'm gonna be missing any latest update if you up date later..... update ya.... update #_#
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Reviewed By: Snowy Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2004 00:32 CST
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I think the writer of THIS fanfic is out of touch of internet.... remind of me when I'm in school holidays for 3 months, not having the time, helping my parents with their Too much work..... hai hai Get stright to the fact; will ya update? I'm a fan of those three manga stories (I've only read vol 6 for Recca through)I want to say it again.... don't leave a good story ends just like that.... please update. If there is any ratings for writes attitude... I've just give you 6 for making as fans waitng... ya. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!
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Title: story still not updated
Reviewed By: gatomon1 On: February 28, 2004 04:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
well well well you haven't updated yet why why is it something we did if so please tell us and we will reprimand the situation. kill or be killed yeah yeah you know what that got old along time ago but if you don't update like some one else said heads will roll. for pairings i'm way to fond of sasuke and naruto but if you wanna keep it straight then go with naruto hinata and all of you who hate narutoxsasuke can bite me. anyway i'm a fan of rock lee and you did a good job on his fighting style it was as though i was right there watching it in person. will ranma be using the hiryuu korin dan or not because that would be awesome if he actually did you know the move he used to kill saffron for all of you that was his final big ass battle scene on the top of jusendo. anyway to top that all of you added recca now i don't know much about recca so i can't comment on that part of your story. anyway just thought i'd write another review to see if you'd update it or not i hope you won't leave us all hanging or else mister i'll find you and give you such a talking to. just kidding
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Title: update please
Reviewed By: gatomon1 On: February 27, 2004 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
w00t you rock man so rock on and check out these sites that will give you more information on the naruto world. narutochuushin.com narutoguide.com sayonara =^-^=meow
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Title: write more please
Reviewed By: gatomon1 On: February 27, 2004 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
brilliant so good you are at writing i like it alot and thats saying something cause i read alot of fanfiction and write my own but you rule. "awesome" see yah gatomon1@alaska.com
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Title: Update?
Reviewed By: Snowy Yuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2004 12:12 CST
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Hei ya... when will ya update...? come on update ya and I want to say it again.... don't leave a good story ends just like that.... please update. Bad of you to leave it like THAT... Update ya %_#
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Reviewed By: aeon On: February 25, 2004 06:33 CST
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w00t cool! i hope you write about Recca's 8 dragon thingies:P Plx continue it
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