| "The Final Test-Run" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: FREAK014 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cant stop smiling :D :D :D ohhh we luv. wondeful trully. poor harpbro. poor poor him,lucky lucky us. it was really good luv it completely. update soon its really good.
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Reviewed By: euphoria On: July 07, 2004 12:06 CDT
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I love your story, and you have an awesome writing technique. You really need to update, because i'm way to excited to see what's going to happen and next. And I love Harpie's Brother, he's to damn funny!
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Title: next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: silen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2004 22:00 CDT
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Reviewed By: mOOferZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 00:32 CST
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please please update soon! your fics are so good!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: StarHoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2004 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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::blink blink::I knew it. Kabia does use his comp skills for perverted things. I love the story so far please continue. I'll give ya an ice cream covered bishie of your choice. With all the topings.
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Reviewed By: mOOferZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2004 00:30 CST
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this is a really good fic!! please please update sooner!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: sayu On: January 14, 2004 19:35 CST
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I've read your story sooooooooooo many times... not supposed 2 b an insult or sumthin' but when will u update cuz this story TOTALLY ROCKS!!!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 21:00 CST
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a little weird but interesting- how will it end? update soon!
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2003 20:14 CST
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This is my third time reveiwing this but i dont care! nice chapter update soon!
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like how this is turning out, it's been a while since I've read a fic that left me wondering now what are they going to do now? as much as this one has(I wonder how Kaiba would react if something DID happen ^w^). Anyways, I hope to see more relitivly soon. Ja.
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey you updated! This is great you need to update again SOON!
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Reviewed By: purkle dragon goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 12:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story... Wonder what all the extras are? Oh and noticed a couple of spelling/word order mistakes hun.
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Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 13:00 CST
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continue writing this. i have a feeling it will be good. but i cant say an opinion until you write more
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