| "Play Dead" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Jewel On: May 04, 2004 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story could be promising but you need more to judge it. I liked though.
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Title: Prologue
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 07:08 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm interested. Please continue.
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Title: might be good
Reviewed By: Ranchan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 11:49 CST
Comment/Review:
Thios story looks promising, I would like to see ranma grow up in harsh streets, maybie becoming a theif to survive? I also think he should get the jesunkyo curse maybie because of a way to hide mhimself from the hibiki clan or by accident. these are my thoughts, good luck.
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: December 03, 2003 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good start. Lots of possibilities. Ranma's personality is sure to be quite different, depending on whether he is abandoned, adopted, etc. I assume the Tendo and other pledges never occur.
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