| "Angel of Silver Magic" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: To: HotsummerYami
Reviewed By: mistress_of_ra [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 13:56 CST
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The reason that the lyrics are wrong is because I got them off of animelyrics.com or some site like that. I always thought those were the wrong lyrics. Anyways, the lyrics in my fic are the rght lyrics but to a different version, not the one in the game. The lyrics in my fic are the lyrics are sung by a Japanese girl but in English so the lyrics ae different. Ne1, thanks for pointing that out. I thought nobody noticed.
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Title: It's me!
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, um when you sang 1000 words, all your words were wrong. The first lyrics go, "I know that your hiding things, using gentle words, to shelter me. Your words were like a dream. But dreams could never fool me. Not that easily. I acted so distant then, didn't say good-bye before your left. But I was listening. You'll fight your battles far from me. Far too easily. Save your tears, cause I come back. I could hear that you whispered as you walked through that door. But still I swore to hide the pain, when I turn back the pages. Shining might have been the answer. What if I cried my eyes out and begged you not to depart. But now Im not afraid to say what's in my heart. Though a thousand words, calling out throught the ages. They'll fly to you, even though I can't see, I know their reaching you. Suspended on Silver Wing. Cause a thousand words One 1000 embraces, will cradle you Making all of your weary days seem far away, they'll hold you forever. (Instrumental) Well if you need to hear it over again in the game, go to Luca and go to the stadium. I recorded the part where Yuna was singing. In the end of the game, I heard the whole song. The lyrics I gave you werre only the ones Yuna sang and Lenne. Well anyways, Nice story! It's hilarious! Please write more!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2003 16:24 CST
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as always i enjoy! stupid homework.... ahhh i liked it how you got bakura a spot in all htis and stuff. anyways can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 19:55 CST
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good story! 'besides im hungry' lol that was funny reminds me of me. lol good 'ol tv! hehe happens to me all the time!
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 15:17 CST
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I like this story keep it up!
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Reviewed By: sakuracheery2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 07:49 CST
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SUPER fic so far!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its awsome! i love yami in pharaoh garb... *drolls * yay! anway good plot! tea party! oh and are there other angels? that'd be cool!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 18:18 CST
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good! its pretty good! Oh by the way i went to that site you talked about its sooo awsome the outfits are really awsome! Anyway great cliff hanger. Wait did i just say that? crap... lol
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Title: Pretty good!
Reviewed By: TAB [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 13:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's interesting. I thought it was funny when Yami was stuttering. Please upload the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 14:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good start! when are you going to upload? SOOOOOOON ^_^ lol lol
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