| "Swimsuit Shopping" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Title: God girl
Reviewed By: Again Amanda On: December 10, 2003 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn girl! You always make the best EVER! I like this one better than my fav 'Like This' by you. After reading this, the next day which is today, I went shopping and while trying on clothes that's all I thought about! It was such a great idea and I always ask myself 'why didn't I think of that?!' LOL! Its so great, supporting that always. MAKE MORE! Again, ~Amanda
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Title: swimsuit shopping
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 09:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so COOL:D
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Reviewed By: Kagney On: December 05, 2003 08:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Great job! I give the story a perfect ten especially Inuyasha. To bad I don't have him for a shopping partner. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Silent Miko Killer04 On: December 05, 2003 05:14 CST
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this was a really good fic....i hope u will continue it or are u just gonna leave it there? *makes sad face* well it was great that u made the friends come and they had to hold back on the moans and i had to laught when he mouthed 'my bitch' it was great.....well if u decide to keep going with the fic i support u 100% all the way....anyways this is a really good fic and i hope that u do make this a continuing fic but if not its still great ^^
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 21:55 CST
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Great story. The thrill of getting caught! And it was a nice switch of InuYasha wanting Kagome to show skin. I got a little confused about the broken lock part though. But hey it's late. I probably didn't read it right. Hmm. How did the door stay closed if it was broken. Making her friends show up was brilliant. I could see their faces twisting to hold in the moans and changing according to what the girls said. I just had to laugh when he mouthed "My bitch". It is definatly something I could see InuYasha do. And at least one of her friends is thinking. But then again the girl with the long hair always was the smart one of the group. You've pumped out another masterpiece. Well done.
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Reviewed By: Frozen Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 11:31 CST
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Sounds quite amusing, I must say. Too bad all the good stores around here put security cameras in the dressing rooms! You did a damn good job.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 20:33 CST
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hehehe dirty dirty Inu Yasha and Kagome. I had to hold in my laughter cause my roommate is asleep. ^_^ funny funny. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Whitney Lin13 On: December 03, 2003 19:13 CST
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YAY! It was the perfect thing to get my mind off the stupid Kikyo episode thats on tonight. Gah, i hate Kikyo. Im Inu/Kag all the way. ^__^ You should make like the fic to this. Lol, the whole vacation. If your not already, but it says one-shot so yeah. -Can be seen trying to ignore the Kikyo episode.- GOD! STUPID SON OF A BITCH! -is growling then suddenly realises she is still here.- Oops, sorry about that. T___T stupid Inu, get away from Kikyo! Well, im off to read this and The Agency again. Gotta get my mind off kikyo and Inu. -sigh- SO much anger i hold. BYES! LOVED IT!! ^___^ You should definately make the whole vacation! ^__~
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Reviewed By: Sugarhighs:P [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very interesting with the whole lemon-action-while-listening-to-your-friends-chat. I like it. I look forward to more. ~Jessica ^_^
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 17:12 CST
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am im a major hentai if i liked this? lol it was soo good! ur great!! n under fave authors =D
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweeeeeeeeet. Love the lemony goodness ^~^
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Reviewed By: natsel On: December 03, 2003 15:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe... It's funny AND lemon sweet~ gotta love it!! Great job~!
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Reviewed By: ME On: December 03, 2003 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!!! as always--a pleasure to read^_~ poor Kagome!! never able to wear an outfit twice--Inu, just can't help himself^_~...yeah,....poor Kagome....
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 13:47 CST
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That was funny, and a really good lemon. I liked the ending the best. Keep it up!
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Title: Mwahahaha! 1st Reviewer!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me be your first reviewer! ^^ I love this story! Are you going to keep it a one-shot, or will you do their vacation too? Keep on going!!!! *going off to look at any other stories by EmeraldDragon* *grins*
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