| "Swimsuit Shopping" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Abi On: October 11, 2004 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDD it!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: utsukushi_dream On: October 08, 2004 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHH FANTASTIC! I can't believe how great your ideas are!!!!!! plzzzz keep writing lemons!!!!! Mmmmmmm...
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah! Someone finally cleared up the whole reason why he always calls her a bitch! It was SOO obvious with the whole dog-demon thing. But that was awesome! you should make a full story with lemon scenes. Your so great at them!
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Reviewed By: inu4life On: July 12, 2004 20:56 CDT
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OMG!!! THAT WAS AWESOME!!!! ME LIKEY... [(me likey mikey)HAHAHAHA from the yahoo personals ad] hahahahaha.... WRITE MORE!!! do a san/mir one!!! hehehehehehehehe naughty naughty! ^_^ great job. you have talent, dont let it go to waste. keep up the AWESOME work!
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Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING!! Truly it was. If you can get someone "happy" then you're doing the right thing. Now only if you could buy Inu's like that in a package I'd have TOO much fun
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Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING!! Truly it was. If you can get someone "happy" then you're doing the right thing. Now only if you could buy Inu's like that in a package I'd have TOO much fun
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Reviewed By: Demoness_Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 13:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AMAZING!! Truly it was. If you can get someone "happy" then you're doing the right thing. Now only if you could buy Inu's like that in a package I'd have TOO much fun
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Title: Hot
Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad to say that I wanted to fuck in the dressing room but i don't know if i could pull it off. Its nice to know that some out there is as perverted as me. Love the story.
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 13:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
brava! brava!...best one shot ever!!...manh kagome is the luckiest girl in the world!!...aw man im about to go swim suit shoppin wit mai mom and i cant stop thinkin about this!!!!...mai face is so red now...lol...hope yu conyinue with this story!..
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not in) On: March 18, 2004 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, the windows are foggy. O-well that was a graet story!!! Ok the fog is going way, well see ya later, bye.
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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon On: March 15, 2004 13:02 CST
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Geez, I'd like to know where SHE shops! Just try and find a normal, attractive swimsuit in a beach town like where I live...especially ones that get that kind of reaction, lol!!! ^_~ You did a great job with this story, and as always, I envy your ability to write a good lemon. Keep it up, and your readers will continue to drool, heh
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: inuXkag4eva On: February 23, 2004 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I no I no, I'm a totall hentai!! but this was awsome!!! i loved the part were Yuka, and Eri, and other gurl come in! that was sooooo halarious!!! i thought you were going to make them walk in on Inuyashas and Kagomes lil session!!!! that would have been SOOOOOOO funny!!! i really like your work and should never stop!! keep writing!!! Hey this is just alil thing i wish could happen!!! You should make more chappies about the vacation and everythin, and have Kagome meet up with those gurls and act all weird and they'll be like ???? That would be halarious!!!! well anyways if you do that or not it's still really really REALLY good!!! aways continue!!! luv ya and your writin! Ja ~inuXkag4eva
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Reviewed By: Salami On: February 12, 2004 11:34 CST
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Oi! (realizes she's not a guy)I mean, hey, what's up! I loved this one shot, it was so funny. I loved the convo going on between her friends while they were....um....busy. It was really funy, and I think that this would make a great fanfiction, not just a oneshot...like the whole vacation or something like that. But first, you have to update Playboy. must update playboy...or else I'll....throw a mongoose at you.*scratches head* Um, okay that was wierd, just ignore that I put that in there. Anyway, great lemon, even better than Spooks Delight. Please make a whole story out of it.
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Reviewed By: missthang1114 On: January 02, 2004 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was sooooooo funny i loved it (i loved how her friend ragged on inuyasha lol sooo funny)
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Reviewed By: Deni On: December 25, 2003 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading some other fics and this one is so great! Though i will say I wish Kagome had slapped Inu for being so blase about the matter in the end
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