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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 13:47 CST
Comment/Review:
That was funny, and a really good lemon. I liked the ending the best. Keep it up!
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Title: Mwahahaha! 1st Reviewer!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me be your first reviewer! ^^ I love this story! Are you going to keep it a one-shot, or will you do their vacation too? Keep on going!!!! *going off to look at any other stories by EmeraldDragon* *grins*
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