| "Fallen Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: good job Raven
Reviewed By: RavenCrow16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOOD JOB RAVEN I SNUCK ONTO YOUR SCREEN NAME HOPE YOU DON'T MIND.
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Reviewed By: Clair On: February 09, 2004 16:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Soooooooooooooooooooo Who is he?
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2004 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE WRITE MORE>
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Title: Like it.....
Reviewed By: RavenCrow16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its me again I like this story too! :)
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Reviewed By: chihiro-san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2003 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great job! You're really getting better! I could tell that you were trying not to start so much with 'he' and 'she'(you were, were'nt you? Ah well. even if you weren't.). Absolutely brilliant! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: chihiro-san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very creative! I likes it a LOT! Just one suggestion: Try to mix it up a bit. Don't start every sentance with 'he' or 'she'. I have a really bad habbit of doing that, and I hope you don't take offense or anything! I like it so far. Keep up the good work.
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