| "Der Widerspruch" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Sirencry On: March 06, 2005 09:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story but the goldfish seems to have made an unexplained disappearance part way through chapter 3, perhaps omi left it with the ferris wheel operator to babay sit? some of the things omi and nagi were doing up there may not have been suitable to a poor innocent goldfish, great story, can't wait for an update ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hell's Bitch On: December 14, 2003 00:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Off to a good start. Haven't seen a 'readable' Nagi/Omi fic in quite awhile. Look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 12:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Looks Yummie..my fav paring for weiss is Omi and Nagi..good luck!
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