| "Knowing (My Kitsune p2)" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: stix On: August 01, 2005 14:03 CDT
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i loved this story. it was great. please add more to this story soon.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 12:32 CDT
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Great! actually a had this huge review and my battery is dying so i have to do a short one and say i liked this and im off to read the next one
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Title: HieiLover#?
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 14:00 CDT
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Yup, you rock. As I'm sure you can guess, I'm making my way through this series for the third time now (see my second review for My Kitsune). I kinda feel stupid reviewing like this, but I figured it might make you feel special...that, and encourage you to update sooner! ^__^ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!
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Title: HieiLover#?
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okie-dokie, I'm gonna assume that this is the end of this part since you already have a part 3 and 4 written... Well, unlike my review for the first part of your story (was it "homecoming"?), I'm not going to beg you to write more because...umm...obviously you already have. Yeah. Hn. But as in said previous review, your story still rocks. As in totally, completely, 100%. Yup! Anywho, keep up the good work -- I'm off to start part #3!!!
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Title: waz up yyh fans?
Reviewed By: kit_Airiden [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what is wrong with this? I know! where are your reveiws?!?!?!?! are there really that few yyh fans??? *goes on rampage* this is such a good story! it's so sweet ^_^
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Title: Knowing
Reviewed By: Lady_Readwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A lot of noticable spelling and grammar errors here. It read a lot like a first, rough draft. Again, when you get the time, try looking this over again, tightening up a few scenes and eliminating some of those errors! ^__~ Also, while the switching point of view from Kurama to Hiei is all well and good, you shouldn't have to repeat the narration of scenes over again. It's boring and a waste of time. Keep the plot moving, from one scene to another. In addition, what's with the waxing of all the poetry? Angst is all well and good, but again, you're dragging it out way too much. Hit your point with the power of a punch and accuracy of a (hn) spirit gun, and then move on. It's a good story. Creative. It has a lot of potential that I haven't seen it live up to yet. I look forward to it, though.
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 09:00 CST
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Wow you keep making this more and more intersting!!!please keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: the ECK [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 03:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I was amazed at this story. From the summary I wasn't really expecting much since I was just fic surfing and bored, but the fic was so good it immediately got me hooked. I can't wait to read more. It's very well written and the plot is very unique as well. I hope you continue with this soon, its already a definite favorite of mine! And that's quite a bit since I'm hard to please fic-wise! ^_^ Good job! evercool_clear@yahoo.com ~evercool resurrected
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2003 09:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More please? I want to know if they get rid of Yomis scent and what happens next!
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please hury and update!! Oh man i have to know what happens next!! I'll die from all the suspense!! Please update this!!
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