| "The Battle City Tournament" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 15:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Reem: First... IT WASN"T ME :( *snaps out of upsetness* Good but Yami is Mine UPDATE! Remasi: Second I no Garline*)* reiew will not be up much longer but quickly um EXCUSS ME! A fanfic Reem wrote a couple years ago would not be as good as they are now. Our fanfics will be better in a few years to. AND your a whimp! You wont even show your real name? Dont worry Dreg your stories are good shes just jealous ^_~
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2004 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! YAMI'S GOT'S SOME 'SPLAININ TO DO!!!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2004 12:40 CST
Comment/Review:
(IA) Reem:I know who the mystery whoman is! Remasi(Yami):Who?? Reem: ME BWHAHAHAHAHAHA Remasi: -_- yea anyway great story and sorry we havn't had a chance to read in a while. It seems we kept losing and missing it *glares at Reem * Reem: *in her own little dreamworld * Ahhhhh Remasi: I want Chicken Mc Nuggets ^_^ Everyone: O_o o_O
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 16, 2003 18:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! love this fic! Aren't the characters annoying how they popup and beg for more scenes. Keep going! I think the short chapters are a great idea! Adios!
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Reviewed By: AngelWingAsh [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I understand about the short chapters. I like the story! Now I feel inspired to write my own YGH ficcie!! Leah- YEAH!!! I'LL BE USED!!! *Finally!* Great fic, BTW! ~***AWA and Leah Caffery***~
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Title: Good story...but...
Reviewed By: CuriousLittleBird [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you've done a pretty good job of writing, but...I can't help but notice some "similarities" between this and my story "Seto Kaiba's Perfect Match." It might be just a coincidence, but...I used myself in the story, and my character's name is Robin as well. Please contact me and tell me whether the many similarities are accidental or not.
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still good still good! And i like how you are going by todays standards so Kiaba isn't the only one with the BEWD. ANyway Tim's funny in his stuppidity if you no what i mean. 'its yugi mouto king of games' thing. silly tim. anyways still good for some reason i can't write cliffies *shruggs * thats why my chapters are so long. *has a idea but the same happans as last time * shit... that always seems to happen to me...
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Title: So-So
Reviewed By: Kris1rad [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is nice but their are a few things that need help: 1.) Make the story longer 2.) Make it have more excitment in it 3.) Make it more creative 4.) I don't know
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like your story! GO ROBIN! THough i myself like Yami *Starts dreaming like Robin * *Has an idea. Grabs Yami and starts to run away only to have a lightbulb crack and land on her head.* Shit...
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