| "The Unknown Merciful One" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Review
Reviewed By: dragonk2005 On: January 09, 2004 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unlike other reviewers, I review honestly...this was possibly the WORST Bulma/Vegeta fic I have ever read. 1) The whole idea of Bulma and Yamcha breaking up was based on him raping her is TOTALLY overdone... 2) Bulma saving it for marriage? Puh-leese. Ever notice how she speaks and dresses in the original episodes/manga? She's no Virgin Mary... 3) The dialogue was absolutely horrid and lacked creativity. From one writer to another, before submitting a fic- be sure to check your grammar and spelling. It just looks bad on you for mistakes like that. For someone who has never read such a fic, this may have been 'okay'. Other, I'd suggest you switch to another genre of writing.
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Title: Great Fanfic
Reviewed By: chibiusa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 08:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a big fan of Vegeta and Bulma. I lopve fanfics with them together. I think Bulma should tell Vegeta and if Yamcha finds out then Vegeta can protect Bulma. Write some soon because I want to read more.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: December 31, 2003 17:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Fryjia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
actually its a 9.5 but they wont let me put it in, the fic is great keep writing
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Title: Yea Yea
Reviewed By: That Same Friend On: December 10, 2003 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DUCK!!!! Lol! Hey great chapter #2! I, of course, liked it and can't wait to have more! Well, I'll be waiting c ya later! okie!
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Reviewed By: One of your friends On: December 07, 2003 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Loved it, though I always do seem to rather the fics that portray Yamcha as a bad guy. Can't wait to read more! I'm going to try to review every chapter, okie?
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Reviewed By: Someone who really likes your fic On: December 07, 2003 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey That was really good!!! Can't wait to read more!!
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